Back to Yunho. I love how you don't thump him into stereotypical pathetic, needy sub role. I'm always very wary of how D/s can be mistreated in all fandoms due to sheer ignorance or that kink-of-the-week dismissiveness where it's used as a quick way to get someone's clothes off or to justify dub-con.
You show it as the loving and supportive relationship choice it can be and ease both Yunho and the reader into it at the same time so there is no jarring OOC-ness. In fact, it's one of the least jarring D/s I've read in a while considering how hard it is to shoe-horn two not openly D/s in canon characters into such a framework
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I'm enjoying these challenges even more than I ever imagined. Apart from those times when I go off the rails or allow myself to be distracted by shiny stuff on the kink meme...
I'm so glad you liked Changmin so much in this ♥
LOL you know we were talking about kink_bingo last night - this fic would fulfil ten different squares LMAO I really don't think I'll do it this year. Though I will probably end up getting a card and writing one fic during amnesty, urgh.
The webcam scene is my favourite too, not only for the doubling (tripling?) of the voyeurism, which seems to be emerging as something of a hot button for me this year, but also because your reaction on the first read-through of that scene was just brilliant. Best beta-read response ever LMAO
Anomalocaris sez he could totally take that Rhinopillar. He's so hardcore he scoffs trilobites for breakfast! Happy has no chance. Just as soon as Anomalocaris works out how to breathe outside of a marine environment, that Rhinopillar is dead meat.
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Amazingly witty and very,very enjoyable! Or even more so. You're such a intelligent writer with taste for juicy details, it seriously is something most can only envy. Not to mention that Secretary Shim is the hottest thing in the world.
I really want to leave a good comment about this but I'm utterly speechless and I have no idea what kind of mush my brain has turned into...
This whole fic is amazing. I love how caring yet strict Changmin is and his method of showing Yunho how to please himself instead of others. When he said that he didn't want to disappoint Yunho, it made him seem a lot more human and I really love his insecurity because it shows that he's not perfect.
Happy's role in this is truly adorable. Although not a living being, it gives Yunho a lot of support which I find to be really cute. Yunho's love for his own creation is rather sweet and it really shows his passion for the things that he does. I especially love how he thinks of the people who will be using his products and whether or not they'll like them. It really shines through his personality.
There's so much to say about this and I'm really disappointed that I cannot provide you with more through my comment. This fic really blew my mind away. Thank you for sharing this♥
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked Happy and saw him as an extension of Yunho's personality or as a support for him. I wish Rhinopillar plushies were real!
Wow... What can I say? I'm speechless and so turned on! This was brilliant; hot and wonderfully written. I just love the characterization. Thank you so much!
I can imagine Yunho being so adorable with the plushie.
It's so cute how Yunho desires Changmin but he has to grab hold of his feelings and emotions as it's not "proper"
Yunho being of two extremes...commanding yet dorky is so cute and adorable.
I love Dictator Changmin. It's interesting how as time passes by Yunho keeps imagining UC to be Changmin. It's like this whole cyber communication frees his inhibitions and allows him to breathe.
The last part was so hot.
One thing for sure is that Yunho trust UC alot. Even at the end when he has his slight fear UC might not come, his trust and faith in him pushing him through.
It's like this whole cyber communication frees his inhibitions and allows him to breathe. Yes! That's an excellent summary :D Thank you!!
LOL no I'm not planning a sequel to this. Though I can imagine the scene when Yunho tells Changmin that the Meerdeer was modelled on him, and Changmin would (pretend to) get very cross... XD
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You show it as the loving and supportive relationship choice it can be and ease both Yunho and the reader into it at the same time so there is no jarring OOC-ness. In fact, it's one of the least jarring D/s I've read in a while considering how hard it is to shoe-horn two not openly D/s in canon characters into such a framework ( ... )
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I'm enjoying these challenges even more than I ever imagined.
Apart from those times when I go off the rails or allow myself to be distracted by shiny stuff on the kink meme...
I'm so glad you liked Changmin so much in this ♥
LOL you know we were talking about kink_bingo last night - this fic would fulfil ten different squares LMAO I really don't think I'll do it this year. Though I will probably end up getting a card and writing one fic during amnesty, urgh.
The webcam scene is my favourite too, not only for the doubling (tripling?) of the voyeurism, which seems to be emerging as something of a hot button for me this year, but also because your reaction on the first read-through of that scene was just brilliant. Best beta-read response ever LMAO
Anomalocaris sez he could totally take that Rhinopillar. He's so hardcore he scoffs trilobites for breakfast! Happy has no chance. Just as soon as Anomalocaris works out how to breathe outside of a marine environment, that Rhinopillar is dead meat.
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This whole fic is amazing. I love how caring yet strict Changmin is and his method of showing Yunho how to please himself instead of others. When he said that he didn't want to disappoint Yunho, it made him seem a lot more human and I really love his insecurity because it shows that he's not perfect.
Happy's role in this is truly adorable. Although not a living being, it gives Yunho a lot of support which I find to be really cute. Yunho's love for his own creation is rather sweet and it really shows his passion for the things that he does. I especially love how he thinks of the people who will be using his products and whether or not they'll like them. It really shines through his personality.
There's so much to say about this and I'm really disappointed that I cannot provide you with more through my comment. This fic really blew my mind away. Thank you for sharing this♥
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Thank you so much!
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This is so hot.
I can imagine Yunho being so adorable with the plushie.
It's so cute how Yunho desires Changmin but he has to grab hold of his feelings and emotions as it's not "proper"
Yunho being of two extremes...commanding yet dorky is so cute and adorable.
I love Dictator Changmin. It's interesting how as time passes by Yunho keeps imagining UC to be Changmin. It's like this whole cyber communication frees his inhibitions and allows him to breathe.
The last part was so hot.
One thing for sure is that Yunho trust UC alot. Even at the end when he has his slight fear UC might not come, his trust and faith in him pushing him through.
Will you do a sequel?
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It's like this whole cyber communication frees his inhibitions and allows him to breathe.
Yes! That's an excellent summary :D Thank you!!
LOL no I'm not planning a sequel to this. Though I can imagine the scene when Yunho tells Changmin that the Meerdeer was modelled on him, and Changmin would (pretend to) get very cross... XD
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