Iron Smut Breakup contestant ring!

[mikkeneko]

Hello, and welcome to
Iron Smut Breakup
bringing this contest back from a nearly 2-year hiatus!

Today's board of contestants will be:
annepackrat
inugrlrayn
sky_dark
zakai_Please join the Church of Elric IRC server and go to the room #ironsmutring for coordination. There will not be individual assistants this year, so time prompts as well as answers to any questions you have will

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[annepackrat]

Or Story go here?

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"I can't believe you're planning on doing this," Havoc said staring at Hawkeye as cleaned her gun

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The guard shook his head. "Perhaps at one time, I would have said different, but no, you are not the monster my people think you are."

Shaking his head violently, Roy responded, "No I haven't. I can never fully atone for what I've done. For what I am doing, to her."

"You have suffered enough, Flame Alchemist. But I doubt you will ever believe it." Before Roy could respond, the guard continued. "You have a visitor."

"Who-?" he asked before being interrupted by someone appearing in the doorway to his cell. "Riza," he breathed.

She didn't answer him. Instead she strode forward hauled him up by the collar and gave him a desperate kiss. Roy's eyes widened, and he was too surprised to respond.

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Roy's eyes widened, and he was too surprised to respond. Somewhere in the back of his mind he thought about how she tasted rather unusual, like almonds actually. Almonds and tears.

Jeremiah waited until the kiss was finished. "I will make sure you have privacy." Riza nodded without looking at him. He turned and shut the door.

"Riza, what are you doing here? I'm not going to change my-" His words were stopped by her fingers on his lips.

"I know. I will keep that godblasted promise to you, but in return I want this. I want you."

His eyes widening, Roy stepped back and sat down heavily on the bed. "You- you can't be serious...."

Frowning, Riza pushed him on his back, "It's Equivalent Exchange isn't it? You and father always put so much stock in that principle, then why can't I do the same?"

"This is hardly the time!" he replied, worried at her red rimmed eyes.

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"You have no more time!" she shouted at him, hands and face buried in his shirt, staining it with fresh tears. "Please, Roy," she begged "Give me this, please..."

Roy's response was lift her chin up and meet his lips to hers. The kiss was sloppy, and at a bad angle, but he could still tell that she tasted like almonds. Well, now it was almonds and tears.

Reluctantly, he broke the kiss and flipped her over on her back. He kissed down her neck, then hiked up her shirt and kissed her stomach. She wiggled as he touched a ticklish spot, letting out a strained hiccup somewhere between a sob and a laugh.

"I'm sorry, Riza," he said in between kisses, "I'm sorry this is all I can give you."

Sighing as his hand reached under her shirt and engulfed a breast, she said, "This is all I need."

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Sighing as his hand reached under her shirt and engulfed a breast, she said, "This is all I need

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Now she also moved lower and slid a hand into the back of his pants. She rubbed his butt lightly, and Roy yelped. He removed his hand and held it one of his own. At her questioning glance he sighed, "Sorry, I have a ticklish ass."

She smiled and moved her hand to the safer area of his side. "Is that why there are so many gay rumors about you?"

Rolling his eyes, Roy started undoing her belt. "I'm fairly sure General Armstrong was the one spreading those."

She stroked his now prominent erection, then drifted up to pull down his pants. "You have to admit it was a brilliant strategy." Her face darkened and she paused, "I guess it doesn't matter now though does it?"

Roy leaned down and kissed her again. He slid his hand into the front of her underwear and she bit back a moan. "Don't think about it," he whispered, "Just don't think about it."

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"Don't think about it," he whispered, "Just don't think about it."

She nodded even as her hips bucked up to meet his hand that was stroking her folds. Stilling him, she pulled his hand free. "I want to see you," she said huskily.

"All right," he replied pulling away enough to remove his shoes and socks, then push his pants and boxers the rest of the way off his hips. He turned back to find that she'd also stripped. He took a moment to just sit back and stare at the vision that was Riza Hawkeye naked.

"What?" she asked, a faint hint of red dotting her cheeks.

Sighing he reached out and pulled her into a kiss. "You're beautiful you know that?"

Riza's blush deepened, but a shy smile was on her lips. "Thank you."

Her response was a smirk, and another kiss as Roy's hands returned to where they'd been earlier. The smirk widened when a brush of her clit caused her to shudder.

She was not idle either, as fingers explored him, tentative at first, but with increasing confidence.

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He moaned when she wrapped her fingers around his penis and stroked downward, then moaned again as she lightly raked him with her fingernails on the upstroke. Soon her other hand went back to his rear and the combination of both hands caused him to shudder in turn.

"Riza..." he said brokenly, "I can't take much more...."

Nodding into his shoulder, she let him go, with one hand, the other traveling behind his neck to pull him down on top of her. He kissed her and grabbed hold of his cock and pushed.

Her face twisted up at first, but as the initial discomfort of penetration faded, she relaxed. She opened her eyes to find his worried black ones staring back at her. "Is this okay?" he asked.

She nodded and bucked her hips up to emphasize her point. He shuddered at the movement. "Okay, you're ready." Pulling back he slammed back into her, causing her to moan, and wrap her legs around his back.

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They moved together, back and forth in a smooth glide. Slowly they rocked in a desperate attempt to prolong the moment and savor what little time they had left together. But all good things must come to an end, and soon the wave crested over her and she arced off the bed her blood singing with his flame until she was nothing but cinders, and she fell bonelessly back on the bed.

He came soon after her, emptying himself in her wetness, as always the cool complement to his flame. He collapsed on top of her, but managed to roll partially to the side so she wasn't bearing his full weight. (She'd born him up so much already, why should she have to do it at the end too?)

As the afterglow faded, he became aware of wetness on his hand, and he looked up to see tears running down her face.

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He kissed her and whispered, "Thank you," he said, before burying his head in her shoulder. Soon his tears joined hers.

Together they weeped silently for what seemed like an eternity. Eventually there was no more tears, just an empty ache. "Thank you," Riza said again, kissing him for the last time. She slid out from under him and began to dress.

Roy sat up and pulled on his pants and boxers, but left the shirt on the floor. "Thank you for keeping your promise."

She paused briefly, but then continued doing up the buttons on her shirt. "Of course. I always keep my promises." When she was dressed she signaled to Jeremiah she was ready to leave.

She turned to leave but was stopped when Roy embraced her from behind. She turned around and wrapped her arms around his neck. "I love you," he whispered before letting her go. She turned again and went out the door.

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His eyes were wet, but there wasn't a raincloud in sight.

[annepackrat]

This one gets my vote #1.

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Vote #2

[hieronymousb]

Vote one goes here. I enjoyed the premise of this fic. It got into the smut quickly. Also, of the four fics, it was the one that I personally found to be the sexiest. Good job!