Iron Smut Breakup contestant ring!

[mikkeneko]

Hello, and welcome to
Iron Smut Breakup
bringing this contest back from a nearly 2-year hiatus!

Today's board of contestants will be:
annepackrat
inugrlrayn
sky_dark
zakai_Please join the Church of Elric IRC server and go to the room #ironsmutring for coordination. There will not be individual assistants this year, so time prompts as well as answers to any questions you have will

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[annepackrat]

Sighing as his hand reached under her shirt and engulfed a breast, she said, "This is all I need."

He quickly took off her shirt, and at her urging removed his own jail-issued one. Her stomach was soon left alone as she pulled him back up to her lips. One hand went behind her head and the other returned to her breast, this time flicking the nipple. He smirked at her muffled gasp, and slid her bra up and freeing each side in turn.

He sat up on one arm and regarded her right breast while fondling the left. "You know these are bigger than I thought they'd be," he said smirking.

"How-" She gasped as a thumb again met her nipple, "How can you joke at a time like this?"

His eyes clouded, and he kissed her neck. "Why not now? As you said, I have no other time left, so it might as well be now."

A fresh sob tore from her throat at this reminder, but it turned into a strangled moan as he took a nipple in her mouth and let his other hand wander down into the front of her pants.

Riza's hands had been exploring his back, picking out and lightly tracing the scars there. Now she also moved lower and slid a hand into the back of his pants.

[annepackrat]

Now she also moved lower and slid a hand into the back of his pants. She rubbed his butt lightly, and Roy yelped. He removed his hand and held it one of his own. At her questioning glance he sighed, "Sorry, I have a ticklish ass."

She smiled and moved her hand to the safer area of his side. "Is that why there are so many gay rumors about you?"

Rolling his eyes, Roy started undoing her belt. "I'm fairly sure General Armstrong was the one spreading those."

She stroked his now prominent erection, then drifted up to pull down his pants. "You have to admit it was a brilliant strategy." Her face darkened and she paused, "I guess it doesn't matter now though does it?"

Roy leaned down and kissed her again. He slid his hand into the front of her underwear and she bit back a moan. "Don't think about it," he whispered, "Just don't think about it."

[annepackrat]

"Don't think about it," he whispered, "Just don't think about it."

She nodded even as her hips bucked up to meet his hand that was stroking her folds. Stilling him, she pulled his hand free. "I want to see you," she said huskily.

"All right," he replied pulling away enough to remove his shoes and socks, then push his pants and boxers the rest of the way off his hips. He turned back to find that she'd also stripped. He took a moment to just sit back and stare at the vision that was Riza Hawkeye naked.

"What?" she asked, a faint hint of red dotting her cheeks.

Sighing he reached out and pulled her into a kiss. "You're beautiful you know that?"

Riza's blush deepened, but a shy smile was on her lips. "Thank you."

Her response was a smirk, and another kiss as Roy's hands returned to where they'd been earlier. The smirk widened when a brush of her clit caused her to shudder.

She was not idle either, as fingers explored him, tentative at first, but with increasing confidence.

[annepackrat]

He moaned when she wrapped her fingers around his penis and stroked downward, then moaned again as she lightly raked him with her fingernails on the upstroke. Soon her other hand went back to his rear and the combination of both hands caused him to shudder in turn.

"Riza..." he said brokenly, "I can't take much more...."

Nodding into his shoulder, she let him go, with one hand, the other traveling behind his neck to pull him down on top of her. He kissed her and grabbed hold of his cock and pushed.

Her face twisted up at first, but as the initial discomfort of penetration faded, she relaxed. She opened her eyes to find his worried black ones staring back at her. "Is this okay?" he asked.

She nodded and bucked her hips up to emphasize her point. He shuddered at the movement. "Okay, you're ready." Pulling back he slammed back into her, causing her to moan, and wrap her legs around his back.

[annepackrat]

They moved together, back and forth in a smooth glide. Slowly they rocked in a desperate attempt to prolong the moment and savor what little time they had left together. But all good things must come to an end, and soon the wave crested over her and she arced off the bed her blood singing with his flame until she was nothing but cinders, and she fell bonelessly back on the bed.

He came soon after her, emptying himself in her wetness, as always the cool complement to his flame. He collapsed on top of her, but managed to roll partially to the side so she wasn't bearing his full weight. (She'd born him up so much already, why should she have to do it at the end too?)

As the afterglow faded, he became aware of wetness on his hand, and he looked up to see tears running down her face.

[annepackrat]

He kissed her and whispered, "Thank you," he said, before burying his head in her shoulder. Soon his tears joined hers.

Together they weeped silently for what seemed like an eternity. Eventually there was no more tears, just an empty ache. "Thank you," Riza said again, kissing him for the last time. She slid out from under him and began to dress.

Roy sat up and pulled on his pants and boxers, but left the shirt on the floor. "Thank you for keeping your promise."

She paused briefly, but then continued doing up the buttons on her shirt. "Of course. I always keep my promises." When she was dressed she signaled to Jeremiah she was ready to leave.

She turned to leave but was stopped when Roy embraced her from behind. She turned around and wrapped her arms around his neck. "I love you," he whispered before letting her go. She turned again and went out the door.

[annepackrat]

His eyes were wet, but there wasn't a raincloud in sight.

[annepackrat]

This one gets my vote #1.

[annepackrat]

Vote #2

[hieronymousb]

Vote one goes here. I enjoyed the premise of this fic. It got into the smut quickly. Also, of the four fics, it was the one that I personally found to be the sexiest. Good job!