Comments | femgenficathon: underlined for emphasis, Renesmee Cullen and Jo Harvelle, PG

metonomia in femgenficathon

underlined for emphasis, Renesmee Cullen and Jo Harvelle, PG

Aug 15, 2010 15:46

Title: underlined for emphasis
Author: metonomia
Fandom: Twilight, Supernatural
Rating: PG
Warnings: a little violence, even less language
Prompt: Prompt #4 - I was thought to be 'stuck up.' I wasn't. I was just sure of myself. This is and always has been an unforgivable quality to the unsure. - Bette Davis
Summary: Be the change you want to see in the world, ( Read more... )

character: jo harvelle, fandom: twilight series, fandom: supernatural, crossover, author: metanomia, titles m-z, character: renesmee cullen, femgen 2010

Comments 11

rthstewart August 16 2010, 00:56:30 UTC

Just the usual, reading cross over fic for shows I don't watch and books I don't read! But, I love the voice and the commentary about the utter weirdness of the Cullens and the two girls off hunting and complaining about Socrates. And I think the prompt is there -- you are writing two girls who are very sure of themselves. So sure of themselves, that they don't even worry about whether others think they are stuck up.

Lovely work!

metonomia August 16 2010, 02:42:15 UTC

<333 thank you so much! I really really appreciate how into this stuff you are even when you aren't really into the fandom, because your support is fantastic!

anotherdreamer5 August 16 2010, 01:05:18 UTC

omg. This was perfection. I love, love, love where this prompt took you. That you used it to create the character of Renesme into a grown up, confident woman. Fabulous.

I especially loved this exchange, that taught us so much about her:

but when Claire asks how Jake is, with that gossipy tone that means she expects romance novels and engagement rings, Ren doesn’t know how to respond. Jacob is Jacob, her Jacob, her uncle and brother and friend, who taught her to hunt and once drove her across the country just because she wanted to see it all. He’s gorgeous, and she’s old enough to see that, but she cannot understand how she could ever want him. Even worse, she can see that he wants her, that he wants so much to hold her and kiss her and love her, and that he sees absolutely nothing weird about that. But it is weird, and she doesn’t know how to tell him that she will never love him woman to man.I just adore the line about how hard it is not to love someone custom built for her, even as she acknowledges frustration that everyone ( ... )

metonomia August 16 2010, 02:44:25 UTC

Aieee, thank you so much; this comment made me super happy! I'm so pleased that you liked the story!

Re: imprinting...I, like a lot of people, have a big issue with it and I wanted to try to let Ren have my opinions about it while still acknowledging the fact that she does have a relationship with Jacob- just not the one everyone expects. So I'm really glad that section worked out.

Thank you so so much for reading!

anotherdreamer5 August 16 2010, 03:50:29 UTC

Re: imprinting...I, like a lot of people, have a big issue with it and I wanted to try to let Ren have my opinions about it while still acknowledging the fact that she does have a relationship with Jacob- just not the one everyone expects. So I'm really glad that section worked out.Yes, exactly. That's exactly what you did. Showed us a Jacob who was still hers, just not the way everyone expected him to be ( ... )

metonomia August 16 2010, 06:56:38 UTC

I'm sort of squealing a little bit over this! Thank you so much; I'm really really pleased and grateful that you like it and are picking so much out of it.

rose_griffes August 16 2010, 01:58:03 UTC

Fantastic. I love getting those characters that we only know through glimpses and seeing them brought to life.

Laughed out loud at the part about craving B-negative.

metonomia August 16 2010, 02:47:22 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad that the characters came off well! :)

jacyevans August 22 2010, 19:11:23 UTC

It takes a lot for me to read a fic and love Renesmee. And I mean a lot.

I love your Ren. I love that she isn't in love with Jake, that she loves being immortal yet still wants change and to find herself. Her and Jo are a perfect combination, and I didn't want the fic to end. I want to read more about them.

So much love for this fic :D

metonomia August 23 2010, 02:53:05 UTC

:DDD Thank you so much; your comment made me really happy!! I love the Renesmee of the group of fandom that says she doesn't have to be perfectly happy with the Cullen/wolf-printers lifestyle, and I loved exploring her. And Jo should just be everyone's friend :D

hungrytiger11 April 10 2011, 20:35:07 UTC

I don't really read or watch either series but I found this story absolutely fascinating. Good work!