underlined for emphasis, Renesmee Cullen and Jo Harvelle, PG

[metonomia]

Title: underlined for emphasis
Author: metonomia 
Fandom: Twilight, Supernatural
Rating: PG
Warnings: a little violence, even less language
Prompt: Prompt #4 - I was thought to be 'stuck up.' I wasn't. I was just sure of myself. This is and always has been an unforgivable quality to the unsure. - Bette Davis
Summary: Be the change you want to see in the world,

Comments

[anotherdreamer5]

Re: imprinting...I, like a lot of people, have a big issue with it and I wanted to try to let Ren have my opinions about it while still acknowledging the fact that she does have a relationship with Jacob- just not the one everyone expects. So I'm really glad that section worked out.

Yes, exactly. That's exactly what you did. Showed us a Jacob who was still hers, just not the way everyone expected him to be.

I also liked the little details that you had with regard to her relationship with Bella. You hinted that they weren't that close, or rather than they didn't quite fit together right, but were still close. I don't know. It was just subtle and great.

I also really liked that you still made her dangerous, thinking about Jo's blood, and capable of annoyance, as people kept oggling her family. I guess that's what you showed best about her relationship with her parents, that it was strange for her to be seven and seventeen, adn she didn't know where she fit except that she didn't want the name they gave her, wanted to be someone unique and not just the product of her grandparents. She liked the life she had, playing never ending duets and visiting her grandparents and going to college and studying her own past, but it was hard to reconcile that with her parents, who were so caught up in each other, and such a single unit, going off on honeymoons and being so strangely into one another.

Yeah, I just think this piece will stay with me a while.

[metonomia]

I'm sort of squealing a little bit over this! Thank you so much; I'm really really pleased and grateful that you like it and are picking so much out of it.