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joeybug March 7 2008, 00:48:19 UTC
Interesting! Loving this...will you post a chapter a day if you can manage it, because I'm pretty sure you said it was already completed!

Looking forward to the next installment, maybe that will tell us more.

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fee_folay March 7 2008, 23:58:35 UTC
Yes, it is completed, and barring loss of internet (which happens periodically due to terrible service provider) I will post once a day. Thanks for sticking with me!

Fee

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angelcat2865 March 7 2008, 02:17:27 UTC
great update

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fee_folay March 7 2008, 23:57:15 UTC
Still with me? Yippie!

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montycrowley March 7 2008, 02:48:55 UTC
Just the sort of thing I wanted to read.

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montycrowley March 7 2008, 02:54:09 UTC
And to think that I almost didn't read it because I thought the summary was trying too hard...

Okay, I HATE those ones that are all "I come bearing fic. Slash if you squint! I own House and Wilson! LOL JUST KIDDING. If I owned House and Wilson, they'd be having sex on the show by now! Anyway a plot bunny bit me and I wrote this in five minutes, so I didn't get a beta! R&R PLZ!"

Those stories make me want to beat myself to death with a stuffed unicorn.

So when I read your (only slightly pretentious summary) I was all "Sounds good... TOO good. Yeah, House_wilson, you're usually an okay community...but what have you done for me LATELY?"

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fee_folay March 7 2008, 11:37:30 UTC
Well, I am certainly glad you did decide to give it a try, despite my "summary." But honestly, I am not sure to what you are referring. Which part of my summary seemed pretentious? Because that certainly wasn't my intention. If it struck readers that way I need to change it. I do tend to be wordy, but that is just me... I like WORDS and I use them - a lot. Heck, you should see the summary and into notes on my Journal about my stories! But then again, as a reader, I always like some background info - so I tend to give it in my work ( ... )

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montycrowley March 7 2008, 15:58:58 UTC
Oh, no, I didn't mean to come across as over-critical. I think your story is really excellent and I'm definitely looking forward to the upcoming chapters. I'm intrigued by the plot, I'm finding it just what I want to read, and I'm generally finding it a pleasant, unexpected surprise that should be garnering tons of attention from the community ( ... )

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theshinyside March 7 2008, 06:17:15 UTC
This was really good! The sad thing is I was trying to plot some sort of supernatural thriller myself, but I don't even need to anymore because you've outdone anything I could've hoped for.

This has a great creepy feel! Can't wait to see the next bit.

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fee_folay March 7 2008, 11:38:50 UTC
Hey, don't let my story disuade you from writing you own! How many "first kiss" stories are out there....and yet people STILL manage to put a new twist on them!

Thanks for the comment!

Fee

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sakurita March 7 2008, 18:04:23 UTC

There are very few supernatural stories in this fandom, thus, yours is very appreciated, it´s like a breeze of fresh air. ♥

By the way, is this story gonna get very scary? Because I can´t sleep if I read horror stories before I go to bed.

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fee_folay March 7 2008, 23:49:05 UTC
And the strange thing is I never intended to write a supernatural story. I just wanted my muse to show up with a gool ol' basic medical story/friendship fic, maybe with a touch of hurt/comfort and angst thrown in for good measure - and I got this. I should have known, as my first House MD piece was also totally out of left field. My House muse apparently has a perverse sense of humor.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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