The Song Of The Siren (외침)
Title: The Song Of The Siren (외침)
Rating: R (for themes)
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Length: 4.5k
Summary:The sea never lies. It never keeps secrets, just washes over and caresses the things that poke at its shores. Kyungsoo is all of these things; Kyungsoo is just like the sea. But the thing about the sea is that the tide always changes, falls back ( Read more... )
Rating: R (for themes)
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Length: 4.5k
Summary:The sea never lies. It never keeps secrets, just washes over and caresses the things that poke at its shores. Kyungsoo is all of these things; Kyungsoo is just like the sea. But the thing about the sea is that the tide always changes, falls back ( Read more... )
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Don't be sad!!
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And Jongdae isn’t by any means immune to the siren’s song I love love love love the focus on the siren's song and how it could lure Jongdae into his death!
the glint in his eye as he beckons Jongdae to come closer, to sing into the sea and hear it sing back, this. whole. thing. is. so. beautifully. worded :)))))))))))))))) this is me preparing you for the keyboard smashes and the screaming (coming soon)
notes to be wrapped up and placed carefully into glass bottles.
Things that the sea catches and doesn’t return. THIS IS SO DREAMY AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! It's honestly gives me this dreamy old faitytale vibe, one that I'd like to be read as a bedtime story to me. Honestly, wow
but you do not lie. Your purpose is to lure me to my death odfsjlsakdjfal;sdkfjc I want to quote this whole paragraph and just the whole fic in general? IT'S SO DREAMYYYYY I love the raw honesty in it, decorated ( ... )
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a symphony meant to be sung by many but be remembered by those who knew him. absolutely gorgeous.
soft hands running along his chest as if amazed, curious by the human thing that he has watched the curiosity from the siren is almost innocent. Almost makes me forget that he's deadly and that his love could be deadly. A magical and powerful creature of the sea curious about a human, beautiful.
“You’re not dying,” you still manage to hold my attention just like in the beginning of this fic!
"When I'm done with you," The siren says, can I just point out how much I love the honesty in the siren's words? and even though his words feel heavy, I still welcome them with a warm heart and I can only imagine how Jongdae must feel.
washing over him in waves larger than that of the sea's this has to be one of my favourite lines in this fic. The power I ( ... )
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pardon the pun but this left me breathless ;;;
your prose is utterly gorgeous and i love that awful buildup (songs and letters and intrigue and want and ksoo invading consciousness even when they're apart) towards totally consumption (both figurative and literal because jongdae is a "memorable meal") and i love how there's this haunting and vivid beauty-torn palms and protesting lungs and skinned knees and broken hearts-even to the brutality of it
so it's very much a case of "lol ksoo eats jongdae" but so beautiful?????????? how he unravels jongdae piece by piece until jongdae is seeking out that brutal, awful ending and being a memorable meal and ahhhhhhhhhhhhh i love siren ksoo and i love that jongdae admires his brutal honesty and i love that he knows what he's doing, that even if it is a case of a being haunted and worn down, he's still choosing this and being one of ksoo's memorable meals
idk i love actual evil mermaids and ksoo honest in being an evil mermaid and apparently character death
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I was definitely going for it to be as beautiful as a death could possibly honestly
<3
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