The Song Of The Siren (외침)
Title: The Song Of The Siren (외침)
Rating: R (for themes)
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Length: 4.5k
Summary:The sea never lies. It never keeps secrets, just washes over and caresses the things that poke at its shores. Kyungsoo is all of these things; Kyungsoo is just like the sea. But the thing about the sea is that the tide always changes, falls back ( Read more... )
Rating: R (for themes)
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Length: 4.5k
Summary:The sea never lies. It never keeps secrets, just washes over and caresses the things that poke at its shores. Kyungsoo is all of these things; Kyungsoo is just like the sea. But the thing about the sea is that the tide always changes, falls back ( Read more... )
a symphony meant to be sung by many but be remembered by those who knew him. absolutely gorgeous.
soft hands running along his chest as if amazed, curious by the human thing that he has watched the curiosity from the siren is almost innocent. Almost makes me forget that he's deadly and that his love could be deadly. A magical and powerful creature of the sea curious about a human, beautiful.
“You’re not dying,” you still manage to hold my attention just like in the beginning of this fic!
"When I'm done with you," The siren says, can I just point out how much I love the honesty in the siren's words? and even though his words feel heavy, I still welcome them with a warm heart and I can only imagine how Jongdae must feel.
washing over him in waves larger than that of the sea's this has to be one of my favourite lines in this fic. The power I can feel pouring from your words, truly amazing.
"In your language I would be called Kyungsoo," the importance of this detail has me like :))))))))))) kdwjndxlwqjdle I LOVE how you included their language barrier in this.
Kyungsoo brings him under the waves with him, places him carefully on the seabed, deep eyes nearly sad as a single finger strokes the skin of Jongdae's cheek. I have forgotten how to form coherent words but yes, I've decided that this is my fav line!!!!
and the thing about the sea is you can never quite catch it and make it stay.
But the sea can catch you this is actually very very very true and very realistic and I love your way with words.
This was absolutely gorgeous from the very beginning to the ending. The characterization was on point, for both of them. Truly on point and it gave me the kind of fairytale vibes especially because I love mystical creatures and everything like this! This is the kind of angst I love, the kind I adore. It's quiet and beautiful and it captures your attention. Just like a painting, except with words instead of colours on a canvas. I love your writing so much and this fic honestly made me ship the pairing. Thank you so much for writing this! I loved it! I love you <3
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