The Song Of The Siren (외침)
Title: The Song Of The Siren (외침)
Rating: R (for themes)
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Length: 4.5k
Summary:The sea never lies. It never keeps secrets, just washes over and caresses the things that poke at its shores. Kyungsoo is all of these things; Kyungsoo is just like the sea. But the thing about the sea is that the tide always changes, falls back ( Read more... )
Rating: R (for themes)
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongdae
Length: 4.5k
Summary:The sea never lies. It never keeps secrets, just washes over and caresses the things that poke at its shores. Kyungsoo is all of these things; Kyungsoo is just like the sea. But the thing about the sea is that the tide always changes, falls back ( Read more... )
And Jongdae isn’t by any means immune to the siren’s song I love love love love the focus on the siren's song and how it could lure Jongdae into his death!
the glint in his eye as he beckons Jongdae to come closer, to sing into the sea and hear it sing back, this. whole. thing. is. so. beautifully. worded :)))))))))))))))) this is me preparing you for the keyboard smashes and the screaming (coming soon)
notes to be wrapped up and placed carefully into glass bottles.
Things that the sea catches and doesn’t return. THIS IS SO DREAMY AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! It's honestly gives me this dreamy old faitytale vibe, one that I'd like to be read as a bedtime story to me. Honestly, wow
but you do not lie. Your purpose is to lure me to my death odfsjlsakdjfal;sdkfjc I want to quote this whole paragraph and just the whole fic in general? IT'S SO DREAMYYYYY I love the raw honesty in it, decorated in beautiful words and I just really love your writing okay ;;;;;;
but he listens. Jongdae is sure of this. mY HEART IS SKIPPING AND I WASN'T EVEN SURE I SHIPPED THIS SHIP BUT NOW I DO THANK YOU V MUCH
knows from many compliments, many lips whispering against the skin that its soft, perfect, just right. can :) you :) like :) not :) ??????? I love the way you've written jongdae!!! wHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME
Jongdae sending his siren love letters in the form of a message in a bottle!!!!!! I am okay!!!! I'm totally fine!!!!! be ready for me screaming at you later on, too :))))))))
isn’t sure if his mouth can form the words Jongdae has written idk why the mental image of this is just so beautiful. The siren trying to form the words and wow I'm so gone
fingers curled around the wetness of the rocks as he begins to sing.
Its a different song tonight, sad and befitting of the sea, slow building and absolutely gorgeous, the whole two paragraphs are gorgeous, I can really imagine everything so well, almost feel the siren's sad tune.
a song meant not to lure Jongdae, but to wear him down slowly I didn't think about it this way but it's still really bittersweet if that were the case I mean. Everything is so...vivid in my mind lsdmsald;lm,kl
not the crashing sorrow of the one from last night, but the quiet mournful build of the one he's been working on this is actually really beautiful. Communication through songs and melodies and idk it just makes so much sense to me in my head, how even /if/ there's a language barrier between them, they can still talk to each other with the language of music.
Jongdae thinks that maybe he would go willingly into the waves, arms outstretched and grin wide, even without the lull of a layered voice sending him to a death he welcomes. this pours with emotions and so many feelings, I absolutely adore the way you're telling this story. I love it so much how you're slowly building things up step by step, like picking petals from a flower.
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a symphony meant to be sung by many but be remembered by those who knew him. absolutely gorgeous.
soft hands running along his chest as if amazed, curious by the human thing that he has watched the curiosity from the siren is almost innocent. Almost makes me forget that he's deadly and that his love could be deadly. A magical and powerful creature of the sea curious about a human, beautiful.
“You’re not dying,” you still manage to hold my attention just like in the beginning of this fic!
"When I'm done with you," The siren says, can I just point out how much I love the honesty in the siren's words? and even though his words feel heavy, I still welcome them with a warm heart and I can only imagine how Jongdae must feel.
washing over him in waves larger than that of the sea's this has to be one of my favourite lines in this fic. The power I can feel pouring from your words, truly amazing.
"In your language I would be called Kyungsoo," the importance of this detail has me like :))))))))))) kdwjndxlwqjdle I LOVE how you included their language barrier in this.
Kyungsoo brings him under the waves with him, places him carefully on the seabed, deep eyes nearly sad as a single finger strokes the skin of Jongdae's cheek. I have forgotten how to form coherent words but yes, I've decided that this is my fav line!!!!
and the thing about the sea is you can never quite catch it and make it stay.
But the sea can catch you this is actually very very very true and very realistic and I love your way with words.
This was absolutely gorgeous from the very beginning to the ending. The characterization was on point, for both of them. Truly on point and it gave me the kind of fairytale vibes especially because I love mystical creatures and everything like this! This is the kind of angst I love, the kind I adore. It's quiet and beautiful and it captures your attention. Just like a painting, except with words instead of colours on a canvas. I love your writing so much and this fic honestly made me ship the pairing. Thank you so much for writing this! I loved it! I love you <3
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