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Jul 17, 2008 17:13

Bunnies lurk in pairs of three.

That being said, I'm getting a quicker head start on Ch13 of Beast. About 2000 words in, and the feel of this chapter is already much different. It's not as dark and shifty, but it does get very political. Caspian and Susan have had their first fight, but since they made up last chapter, expect happier scenes ( Read more... )

beast, malok, susan

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maaike_fluffy July 18 2008, 18:52:13 UTC

I also wondered why it was that Susan earned the title of 'Gentle Queen'. Since the movies never showed it I pictured adult!Susan as some kind of person who always remained calm despite the circumstances, who could find goodness in things that others disliked, and forgiveness where others accused...

OK... does that sound a little too poetic? *shakes head*

I can easily see her disliking the Telmarine ways. She is strong. Not in the 'bloody warrior' way, but as strong personality who sees beyond the surface, with a clear opinion, and courage to speak her mind.

Would she think bad of Caspian because he's a Telmarine? Yes... and no. Caspian is not like others (read: Miraz), but he's grown up in a Telmarine fashion so he will have adopted the ways. Then again, is that a bad thing. No one is perfect. She'll have to learn to live with it...

And because I simply must point it out: the lines "()_()............()_()...........()_()Bunnies lurk in pairs of three." and "Bleg the Giant is a direct descendant from the Giant that attempted to ( ... )

em_teardrops July 18 2008, 22:36:50 UTC

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clippet time em_teardrops July 18 2008, 22:43:21 UTC

Here's a ch13 clippet ( ... )

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maaike_fluffy July 19 2008, 20:11:35 UTC

Are you making sense? *thinks hard* Only if you mean what I think you mean... ;)

I do think going back to England changed Susan. That's why I referred to her in my description as Adult!Susan. I think growing up twice wasn't very good for her...

maaike_fluffy July 19 2008, 20:08:31 UTC

*reads conversation above about Caspian pleasuring himself in a corner*
*cross eyed*
*shakes head*

Wow, that was... random.

I did catch the Bunny-part, actually. Only your chapters are so freaking long I can never comment on what happened in the beginning of it simply because so many awesome things happened after...

I would totally read "History of the Northern Giants",by Blargh the Eternaly Unsatisfied. Reminds me off Ulrick the Awful and Eric the Unhygienic from Harry Potter *lol*

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