Jan 15, 2012 09:11
character: agravaine,
type: can./alt,
character: leon,
character: gwaine,
type: scene extender,
character: percival,
character: merlin/emrys,
✒writing: shatter into...tomorrow,
season: 4,
mood: angst,
✍status: in progress,
character: morgana,
character: arthur,
length: multi chapters,
character: elyan,
mood: multiple,
character: guinevere
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Hee, the house scene was fun to write. Thank you!
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I do hope you won't take so long to post the next part, lol. Great work!
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I have a pretty decent job and I got it because of my older sister. Once I pretended that it was myself and my older sister in the situation Elyan's behavior made a lot more sense to me. I still don't agree with his choice but I could understand his anger and frustration.
I hope everyone is more developed in S5. Seriously Merthur is not that interesting.
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I also adored that Gaius and Gwaine were there for Gwen too and helped her out. And I think you have done a great job with showing the inner turmoil for Arthur still caring for Gwen, yet very angry about her betrayal.
I also love the fact that Gwaine doesn't think something is right! and I really love that you included so much of him in this chapter because I miss series 3 Gwaine!
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Good, I wanted to show the balance of Arthur's feelings. It's pain and anger.
I thought somebody must have noticed that Gwen was happy at the proposal and then all the stuff with Lancelot happens. Someone had to question that and so of course I had to go with Gwaine. lol, I love Gwaine. He just had more depth in season three.
Thank you!
I love your icon-pretty!!
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You write Arthur so well!
I agree. I think that is what annoyed me most is that no one noticed that Gwen was acting a little out of character, especially when she seemed so happy to be marrying Arthur.
I can't wait for the next installment! Hope it coming soon <3!
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That's the issue, that no one at all noticed Gwen acting strangely. I still think Arthur would have been the last person to notice because it was very personal for him and he had his issues with Lancelot. But someone else should have you would think.
Thank you! It should be coming...pretty soon. I just need to make sure I like all the edits I made.
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