Challenge #177
Title: The Critic
Author: enchanted_jae
Team: Aurors
Character(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Warning(s): Mentions of sexual activity
Word count: 100
Challenge: #177 - critique
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This drabble was written for fun, not for profit.
Summary: Draco lists Harry's faults.
"You didn't take sufficient time to prepare me, nor did you use enough lubricant," Draco sniffed, ticking on his fingers as he listed Harry's faults. "You didn't give me a chance to adjust before you began ramming your cock in and out."
Harry groaned and pulled the duvet over his head.
"You didn't bother to reach around and help me along," Draco continued. "In addition, you pulled out too soon after you were finished."
Harry peeked out. "Are you quite through with your critique?" he groused. "Have you anything nice to say?"
"You have good taste in lovers," smirked Draco.
Author: enchanted_jae
Team: Aurors
Character(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Warning(s): Mentions of sexual activity
Word count: 100
Challenge: #177 - critique
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This drabble was written for fun, not for profit.
Summary: Draco lists Harry's faults.
"You didn't take sufficient time to prepare me, nor did you use enough lubricant," Draco sniffed, ticking on his fingers as he listed Harry's faults. "You didn't give me a chance to adjust before you began ramming your cock in and out."
Harry groaned and pulled the duvet over his head.
"You didn't bother to reach around and help me along," Draco continued. "In addition, you pulled out too soon after you were finished."
Harry peeked out. "Are you quite through with your critique?" he groused. "Have you anything nice to say?"
"You have good taste in lovers," smirked Draco.