Comments | dracoharry100: Challenge #177

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Challenge #177

Sep 22, 2010 00:41

Title: The Critic
Author: enchanted_jae
Team: Aurors
Character(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Warning(s): Mentions of sexual activity
Word count: 100
Challenge: #177 - critique
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This drabble was written for fun, not for profit.
Summary: Draco lists Harry's faults.

( The Critic )

critique, enchanted_jae

Comments 5

ajsocks September 22 2010, 05:56:27 UTC

Lol! This was really cute. lol Especially Draco's last line, I could so see him saying that!!

enchanted_jae September 22 2010, 19:48:14 UTC

Let's hope Draco is patient with Harry after this. *laughs*

alisanne September 22 2010, 15:20:05 UTC

Ahahahahahahaha!
Poor Harry. I hope Draco is worth all that. *giggles*

enchanted_jae September 22 2010, 19:48:32 UTC

I'm sure he was; otherwise, Harry would have flounced out. Hah!

hpfangirl71 September 25 2010, 05:44:02 UTC

hilarious final line... lovely dear!!