Title:The Critique
Author:
hpfangirl71 Team: Death Eaters
Rating:PG
Word count: 100
Characters/pairings: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Challenge: prompt #177:Critique
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.
Beta: No Beta, All mistakes are my own.
Authors Notes: Just a bit of unecessary criticism
The Critique by HPFangirl71
“The hair’s a complete mess, manners uncouth and those clothes hardly fashionable.” Draco said quite critically.
Harry glowered at the gorgeous blonde. He’d thought he and Draco were friends now, obviously, he’d been wrong.
“Are you quite through with this impromptu critique?” Harry huffed.
As he turned to leave, he felt Draco’s arm, turning him back around.
“You’re also a brilliant seeker and your eyes are the most amazing green this Slytherin has ever seen. When I look into them, I can’t help but fall in love with you.”
“You love me?” Harry squeaked out.
Embracing him, Draco whispered “Yes…”