Response from Manager
"I read this over the weekend. It's not at all bad by any stretch, but at the same time it's not good enough. It's a fun arena for a show but not necessarily a fresh one (it's a behind the scenes thing at a children's show). It also feels a little like a cable show shoe-horned into a network show. Like it wants to go raunchy but doesn't. So it ends up being sort of neither fish nor fowl."
While it's encouraging, like I could make it someday, I just feel really frustrated that I just barely fell short. UGH!!
I want to see if maybe I can send a second draft based on his comments. We'll see.
While it's encouraging, like I could make it someday, I just feel really frustrated that I just barely fell short. UGH!!
I want to see if maybe I can send a second draft based on his comments. We'll see.