{ snow and smiles

Dec 24, 2011 23:33

Title: snow and smiles 
Author: chaeii
Pairing: homin (Yunho/Changmin)
Rating: G
Word Count: ~1000
Summary: "It snows the first time Changmin sees Yunho.
A/N: mindless!fluff. slee_pig_dragon asked for angst initially, and I don't know how this became the most shallow thing I have ever written. Maybe because it's Christmas Eve.

a coincidental glance out frosted windows )

pairing: homin, rating: g, length: ~1000

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chaeii December 26 2011, 19:23:23 UTC
♥♥♥
but how is this not shallow sobs it's just... idk ;~; but ugh thank you. ♥♥♥ your approval means a lot to me because i admire your writing more than you can ever imagine.

;_____________; waylt! ngl, i do aim for delicate~ writing because i am extremely anal about sentences coming off pretty and subtle and it takes me foreverrr and my fics are always so short short short how do you write long fics impart me your waaaaaays. but i am glad you (!!!) like my writing because ugh idk i am still very unsure about it mostly ;A;

:D i am happy you got the "(with a pencil)" part ;~; I was worried it would be too out of the blue and yes, i was trying to show how changmin was in overdrive, things going in slow motion till he notices every mundane detail. and another was also how temporal a writing in pencil is because you can erase it in a single stroke, can disappear quickly, and this will contrast later with the hearts that are never erased. :33333

haha yes bitchhh it happens every time we study together...if you haven't noticed by now e___e ♥♥♥ it has become a bad habit of mine to scrawl on everyone's notes now.
ugh you stop making my fics sound so much more poetic than they are, how do you do it, really? it's amazing tbh ;~; ♥♥♥ ( please never stop tho )

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heehe December 27 2011, 12:21:42 UTC
ooooh! i did not pick up on the pencil's temporality!!1 that is genius bb, genius. ;~; i love it even more now. ♥

ADMIRE OTHER PEOPLE LAH MY WRITING LIKE P6 GER K.

I DO IT BY TELLING THE TRUTH!!!!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

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