Title: snow and smiles
Author: chaeii
Pairing: homin (Yunho/Changmin)
Rating: G
Word Count: ~1000
Summary: "It snows the first time Changmin sees Yunho.
A/N: mindless!fluff.
slee_pig_dragon asked for angst initially, and I don't know how this became the most shallow thing I have ever written. Maybe because it's Christmas Eve.
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a coincidental glance out frosted windows )
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I found this really cute and sweet and there is this part that i legit just smiled to mnyself and i had butterflies in my chest it was so wonderful. i've not felt that way for so long since secret garden!!!!!! ♥ thank you for letting me feel fluff again. eeek! and i don't think it's shallow at all! girl, shallow is not up your alley. you cannot write shallow. you fail at shallow. kekeke.
and /again/, i just want to say how much i love your writing. it really is beautiful. sentences like this "But maybe it was due to the falling snow and the way the streetlight had shone on Yunho, lighting one side of his face and leaving the rest in shadows." are gorgeous, i really like it not even lying!!!! i like your imagery, it's always delicate (overused word!!!!) like i'm looking through frosted glass or something. it paints a dreamlike picture in my mind, maybe because of how you play with light and subtleties that really bring out the intangibility of the scene - the nuances, like tension and foreshadowing and the ( ... )
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ADMIRE OTHER PEOPLE LAH MY WRITING LIKE P6 GER K.
I DO IT BY TELLING THE TRUTH!!!!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥
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ugh, why are you so emotional ;; ♥♥♥ and ofc i remember you like yunho's side profile you talk about it a lot! i am glad you like it, and i am glad i managed to write this in time for christmas! it usually takes me... months to write something so i am surprised haha maybe it's the ~christmas~ miracle power idk.
aawwhhh never feel that way bb. i enjoy writing fic so never think that any of the fics i write for you are jut written for the sake of churning out a fic. i like to attempt to string words together to form pretty stories so it really is something i enjoy! ♥
i love you, angela, and you always matter, remember that. ♥♥
Merry Christmas!
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Thank you for reading and commenting ~ ♥
Merry Christmas!
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"There’s something familiar about the person, something about his side profile that reminds Changmin of hot coffee in a café on Christmas Eve, of frosted glass and streetlights, and then he remembers." - Yep, that's Leadersshi for u, exuding warmth everywhere he goes (even virtually it seems), hehe. <3
I loved how they were exchanging little doodlings on their notes, how cute! I actually think if HoMin were school mates in RL, their cough lovestory cough i mean friendship would have been this adorably built up.
U have a merry christmas, now. =D
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Thanks for taking out time to read and comment ~ ♥ and merry christmas!
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I think this might've been a line that I liked the most? It describes one of the many things that make Yunho so great, I guess.
I really enjoyed this piece ♥ Looking forward to more from you! :)
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i am glad you enjoyed the fic :D and i hope i don't disappoint ~
Thanks for reading and commenting ~ ♥merry christmas!
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