Girl Like That | Greta/Vicky-T | NC-17 | ~2100 words

May 16, 2008 21:08


Girl Like That
Greta/VickyT | NC-17 | 2100 words
Vicky-T is waiting for her in the hotel room.

Thanks to theaerosolkid for betaing.

For airgiodslv, ♥ ♥ ♥.

all in how you mix the two )

fic, pairing: greta/vicky-t

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airgiodslv May 17 2008, 04:32:29 UTC
Ahahahaha Brendon gets a faraway look in his eyes and has to sit down somewhere!!! Greta is smug! ♥ Greta doesn't smoke, but she does with Vicky-T, because she likes to watch (and be with) her girlfriend, ugh. <3 Her voice is not as rough as it will be once Greta's done tonight!!! Sudden appearance of strap-on omg!

Greta likes fucking her while she's laughing because then she gets to hear the sounds change into something more desperate aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Pulling underwear aside for fingering purposes omgnnnngh. Greta sets her teeth into her skin, but moves down the bed afterwards. adjkdfakjdfajka.

"Shit, ah. I'm going to-- Do you want--" and Greta pulls her mouth away. ...this is probably the point at which I actually died.

Greta doesn't love the strain on her thighs when she's like this, but she wants Vicky-T's tongue now, and she wants Vicky-T's tongue to be exactly where she wants it to be right now, and she wants to rock onto her face until the rhythm is what she wants it to be ...but even if it hadn't, this ( ... )

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disarm_d May 29 2008, 01:38:20 UTC
Thanks so much sweetie. I'm really glad that you liked it! I know I didn't quite manage the dynamic you would have wanted, but little hints popped in. *g* Oops?

*smushes you*

Loooove!

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disarm_d May 29 2008, 01:39:04 UTC
Hahahahahah, I'm glad you're at home, too. Thanks for reading!

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theaerosolkid May 17 2008, 04:47:29 UTC
Greta leaves her thumb where it is, pushing down, but not rubbing, and keeps her hips angled forward to hold the dildo inside of Vicky-T so that she has something to clench around.
Still the HOTTEST THING EVER. ♥

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disarm_d May 29 2008, 01:39:32 UTC
Isn't it more fun on the Greta-is-hot side of the fence?

Thanks again for looking this over!

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eloquentice May 17 2008, 05:01:49 UTC
Good lord.

I really really love how much personality both of them have here, and the great rapport that they so clearly have. It doesn't read like two girls fucking, it reads like Greta and VickyT fucking, which really makes all the difference in the world.

"Shit, ah. I'm going to-- Do you want--" and Greta pulls her mouth away.
Vicky-T breaths in huge, shuddery gulps of air, and Greta can feel her clenching around her fingers, tight all over as Vicky-T tries to pull back from the edge of orgasm.
KILLED ME DEAD. So ridiculously hot on so many levels (such as how VickyT checks with Greta before she comes), and I love love love the detail, because that thing where you're clenching and trying not to ride into the orgasm? It deserves waaaaay more attention than it gets.

keeps her hips angled forward to hold the dildo inside of Vicky-T so that she has something to clench around.See, here's the thing about most people who write girls having sex. Even though they're mostly female, it seems like a lot of them don't think very much about ( ... )

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disarm_d May 29 2008, 01:42:52 UTC
Mini!Lauraaaaa! ♥!

I'm so glad that the characterizations actually worked; this was a shameless PWP, but that's totally amazing to hear.

Even though they're mostly female, it seems like a lot of them don't think very much about what sex with girlparts really entails, and a lot of fic ends up with very similar sex.
Honestly, I'm occasionally confused by the sex with women that gets written. But, I try to remind myself that girls have different preferences, and just because something is a whole world of do not want to me, it doesn't mean that someone else wouldn't like it. Still, how many girls can come easily just from being fucked? Not as many as fanfic would have us believe, thats for sure.

Hahahahhaha, we're enjoying it too, I think! :D

Thanks so much!

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eloquentice May 29 2008, 03:40:22 UTC
Do you realize how much that's caught on, by the way? SO MUCH! Is it strange that I kind of love it?

Still, how many girls can come easily just from being fucked?
FOR SERIOUS. I just really don't understand. It makes me wonder how many people are writing more from a taught-by-porn perspective than a personal-experience perspective. I mean, I haven't had sex, but I definitely know that it takes more than that to get me off. But as you said, people are different? I guess?

<333

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vanilla_alia May 17 2008, 06:13:17 UTC
youuuuuu rule. i can't even formulate like, thoughts or reactions or words or anything of the sort. might I interest you in starting the darnyougreta revolution?

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disarm_d May 29 2008, 01:43:33 UTC
Gretaaaaaaaaaaa. I totally joined that community! \o/

Thank you!!!

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