I really really love how much personality both of them have here, and the great rapport that they so clearly have. It doesn't read like two girls fucking, it reads like Greta and VickyT fucking, which really makes all the difference in the world.
"Shit, ah. I'm going to-- Do you want--" and Greta pulls her mouth away. Vicky-T breaths in huge, shuddery gulps of air, and Greta can feel her clenching around her fingers, tight all over as Vicky-T tries to pull back from the edge of orgasm. KILLED ME DEAD. So ridiculously hot on so many levels (such as how VickyT checks with Greta before she comes), and I love love love the detail, because that thing where you're clenching and trying not to ride into the orgasm? It deserves waaaaay more attention than it gets.
keeps her hips angled forward to hold the dildo inside of Vicky-T so that she has something to clench around. See, here's the thing about most people who write girls having sex. Even though they're mostly female, it seems like a lot of them don't think very much about what sex with girlparts really entails, and a lot of fic ends up with very similar sex (things like tone, mood, characters, &c obviously taken outside of that consideration). So when I see someone actually giving things like cunts, and girl orgasms and so on, some honest attention? I am like this: \o/!
The short version being that I love it, you are awesome, and I'm really enjoying this whole you-and-Jen-writing-porn-for-each-other thing!
I'm so glad that the characterizations actually worked; this was a shameless PWP, but that's totally amazing to hear.
Even though they're mostly female, it seems like a lot of them don't think very much about what sex with girlparts really entails, and a lot of fic ends up with very similar sex. Honestly, I'm occasionally confused by the sex with women that gets written. But, I try to remind myself that girls have different preferences, and just because something is a whole world of do not want to me, it doesn't mean that someone else wouldn't like it. Still, how many girls can come easily just from being fucked? Not as many as fanfic would have us believe, thats for sure.
Do you realize how much that's caught on, by the way? SO MUCH! Is it strange that I kind of love it?
Still, how many girls can come easily just from being fucked? FOR SERIOUS. I just really don't understand. It makes me wonder how many people are writing more from a taught-by-porn perspective than a personal-experience perspective. I mean, I haven't had sex, but I definitely know that it takes more than that to get me off. But as you said, people are different? I guess?
I really really love how much personality both of them have here, and the great rapport that they so clearly have. It doesn't read like two girls fucking, it reads like Greta and VickyT fucking, which really makes all the difference in the world.
"Shit, ah. I'm going to-- Do you want--" and Greta pulls her mouth away.
Vicky-T breaths in huge, shuddery gulps of air, and Greta can feel her clenching around her fingers, tight all over as Vicky-T tries to pull back from the edge of orgasm.
KILLED ME DEAD. So ridiculously hot on so many levels (such as how VickyT checks with Greta before she comes), and I love love love the detail, because that thing where you're clenching and trying not to ride into the orgasm? It deserves waaaaay more attention than it gets.
keeps her hips angled forward to hold the dildo inside of Vicky-T so that she has something to clench around.
See, here's the thing about most people who write girls having sex. Even though they're mostly female, it seems like a lot of them don't think very much about what sex with girlparts really entails, and a lot of fic ends up with very similar sex (things like tone, mood, characters, &c obviously taken outside of that consideration). So when I see someone actually giving things like cunts, and girl orgasms and so on, some honest attention? I am like this: \o/!
The short version being that I love it, you are awesome, and I'm really enjoying this whole you-and-Jen-writing-porn-for-each-other thing!
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I'm so glad that the characterizations actually worked; this was a shameless PWP, but that's totally amazing to hear.
Even though they're mostly female, it seems like a lot of them don't think very much about what sex with girlparts really entails, and a lot of fic ends up with very similar sex.
Honestly, I'm occasionally confused by the sex with women that gets written. But, I try to remind myself that girls have different preferences, and just because something is a whole world of do not want to me, it doesn't mean that someone else wouldn't like it. Still, how many girls can come easily just from being fucked? Not as many as fanfic would have us believe, thats for sure.
Hahahahhaha, we're enjoying it too, I think! :D
Thanks so much!
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Still, how many girls can come easily just from being fucked?
FOR SERIOUS. I just really don't understand. It makes me wonder how many people are writing more from a taught-by-porn perspective than a personal-experience perspective. I mean, I haven't had sex, but I definitely know that it takes more than that to get me off. But as you said, people are different? I guess?
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