This is the first I read of the Sword of Truth series, and here I offer my critique.

It isn't bad.

It is terribly preassumptious, and demands the reader to know (or suspend belief) a lot in a few pages, however.
Naming problems occur with the same frequency asinine Inheritance, with unexplained apostraphies that do not dictate anything.
The authors ( Read more... )

The Psyblade began writing the Eragon "fan"fiction. Why is he doing this? In all honesty, he wants justice to be done. He is positively jealous from the writer, who published and gained millions out of a poorly-written book with stryeotypic races, flat characters, and a non-sensual plot. Is this a personal effort to keep him from going insane? ( Read more... )

~~Takes place at Eldest. Protagonist’s name is Atharavv, a Halfling between Thaleor, an Elf and a human maiden who crosses the western sea. He’s only around a hundred years old, however.

He lives as a hermit, but he was trained by his father the ways of the Rider, who got sentenced for it to exile. Atharavv wasn’t harmed, but he is mostly avoided ( Read more... )

So, I semi-offficially no longer write, but I still post my young ideas here. Feel free to take anything and use it, as long as you mention my name at the end, by the Original Writer - title ( Read more... )