*flops over*
X_____X Okay, finally finished doing the basic editing of Searching. By the last two chapters and epilogue, I was just skimming over and changing the html tags. XD; I've added another two-thousand words to this. Ack.
I'm now going to leave this for...a couple of days so I'll hopefully see it with fresh eyes. It'll be the 'what do I feel/does this work/emotional pulling' read through anyway. I think I'll put notes for what should be changed at the end of this post.
I have a feeling that the first part of this is going to be mostly well-written and the second part won't be as much because I'll have lost steam by that point. XD;;
I...need to answer all the reviews I've been getting.
I also need to sleep. XD;;
Been doing some more wondering about the master and slave thing and I'm wondering if it should be Sahnras who's the narrative character - she should be the one going through the most character development. But hm, that makes her the main character, but she doesn't have to be the narrative character *likes the pov of the outsider/non-human too much. XD;*
I'm now going to leave this for...a couple of days so I'll hopefully see it with fresh eyes. It'll be the 'what do I feel/does this work/emotional pulling' read through anyway. I think I'll put notes for what should be changed at the end of this post.
I have a feeling that the first part of this is going to be mostly well-written and the second part won't be as much because I'll have lost steam by that point. XD;;
I...need to answer all the reviews I've been getting.
I also need to sleep. XD;;
Been doing some more wondering about the master and slave thing and I'm wondering if it should be Sahnras who's the narrative character - she should be the one going through the most character development. But hm, that makes her the main character, but she doesn't have to be the narrative character *likes the pov of the outsider/non-human too much. XD;*