Prison Break - Working Out the Chill

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Working Out the Chill
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln
Category: Het
Rating: NC-17
Warning: No actual slash/incest but proceed with caution if Michael/Lincoln really bothers you.
Word Count: ~ 2200
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: She was cold, and not sure the weather was entirely responsible for that

Comments

[spunkyar]

Wow...that was just as hot as the first one and I really didn't think that was possible. There have been many times in fanfiction that I've wanted to switch places with a character, but never as much as I wanted to be Sara in this story!! Wonderful job!! Even the banter at the beginning was cute. :)

[clair_de_lune]

*fans you a bit*
LOL, thank you. I set the fic back in season 2, right after they met up with Kellerman, and I guess that despite Sara being in a tough spot then, her situation here has its advantages ;)

Glad you enjoyed it :D

[tuesdaeschild]

You're still continuing with this threesome kink then? THANK GOODNESS FOR THAT!!!

This is hot and naughty, just how I like 'em! And I did enjoy the boys undressing each other and indulging in a little fondling! Sara was a real trooper about it too; not exactly loving it but not hating it either. :)

Funnily enough it was quite cold here in England last night...I really could have done with some warming up like this!! I had to be content with snuggling under the quilt though. *sighs*

Another awesome bit of kinky goodness to add to my ever-growing top ten list! :)

*hugs*

[clair_de_lune]

Thank foophile for that ;) And there was another M/S/L prompt from her... *sighs* Maybe next round, or for the amnesty round.

And I did enjoy the boys undressing each other and indulging in a little fondling!

I'm SO surprised!

Sara was a real trooper about it too; not exactly loving it but not hating it either. :)Initially, the fic was supposed to be more angsty, less smutty and a bit more slashy. And Sara being all angsty was supposed to be not surprised but also not to care that much about what the two of them were doing to each other: her relative indifference here is a leftover from my first 'plan

[tuesdaeschild]

And there was another M/S/L prompt from her...

Well done, foophile Erm...oh dear!

I'm SO surprised!

I thought you might be. ;)

her relative indifference here is a leftover from my first 'plan'

I think it would have worked 'angsty' too...especially with being more slashy! But I think you struck a very nice balance.

I still haven't written my founding slashy M/S/L story, hence I couldn't amp up the slash here.

But you are still looking, of course. :)

Between this 'logic' and my editing-mania, I'm hopeless.

Oh no!! Not hopeless at all! It's just that you edit; constantly. And I save; everywhere. ;)

I guess it means Sara's self-calming technics are efficient :-p

Hmmmm, maybe we could take a leaf from her book? ;)

asking peeps recs of their favorite fics (theirs an others) and authors in various fandoms to put together a list.

That sounds like a good idea. I'm up for it. :)

You know you're welcome for both the comment and the fastest beta on Earth...I can be zippy when the occasion demands it!! ;)

*hugs*

[clair_de_lune]

But you are still looking, of course. :)

Indeed. I have been, not later than this afternoon :-p
And I may I've come up with something for a slashy threesome I've been considering for a while. I wanted to write it in Michael's POV but Sara's voice kept popping up. I may have managed to shut her down.

Oh no!! Not hopeless at all! It's just that you edit; constantly. And I save; everywhere. ;)

*high fives you* On the other hand, this fic in particular has been written, beta'ed and fixed within a day. I won't pretend I wouldn't have liked to tweak it a bit longer but I haven't and *gasps* my world didn't stop ;-)

That sounds like a good idea. I'm up for it. :)

Instead of merely posting an entry, I may become obsessive and obnoxious about it, and send emails or PM to my flisters to be sure to reach them (I know how I am). So for now, I'm still pondering the idea ^_^

[foophile]

OMG! You've killed me. I'm dead and therefore am writing you a ghostly message from the beyond to say : SO HOT!

Okay, first this:
Not fair of her, but she was too focused on loss and run, fear and relief, Kellerman on the other side of the thin wall and Michael right next to her, to be into fairness.
Was SO perfect. I love how Sara just needs. There doesn't have to be a lot of emotional BS, she knows this, just do this and move on because without it she can't function. LOVE!

Then this:
They were right on the other side of too tender with each other, lingering just a bit too long, enjoying it just a bit too much. Michael’s hand ran up his brother’s flank, Lincoln gently swatted his butt. SPANKING! Just guh. And Sara watching and being all, hell yes, about it? Double guh.

And finally, this:
Except for the part of her that did. A lot. The same part that got off on being held down and screwed hard and dirty, skin shiny with saliva and sweat, chaffing from kiss bites and touches and nipping and... just too much. Michael met her eyes

[clair_de_lune]

First, let me say that, while writing this, I read your "Before I Wake" story, which is so delicious and tender that my smutty OT3 PWP and I felt a bit sleazy. I'll live, though, no worries *g*

I love how Sara just needs.
Sometimes, the only way to evacuate things is to work them out physically. She could either beat up Kellerman, hit or break something (which she did/will do in S4) or go for a more plesant resolution. Given this was written for a kink comm... :-p

SPANKING! Just guh.
LOL. Glad you approve *g*

As I was saying to Foxy in another comment, initially, the fic was supposed to be a bit more slashy, Sara a bit more angsty because of Kellerman and kind of "yeah, whatever" about the brothers being too affectionate with one another. Basically, I chickened out and I'm sorry there isn't the amount of slash I had planned. I guess it means I'll have to try again ;-) I want to write my really slashy OT3, damn!

Because it's so secret Sara.There are a few occasions on the show - too rare - where we can see how badass she may be.

[melanyebaggins]

Clair wrote another M/S/L pwp? *glee*

That was awesome and all kinds of hot. And I'll be saving it for my stash :P Honestly, you have this knack for picking the absolute best scenarios for these fics ^_^ I bow to you, madam.

[clair_de_lune]

Yet another one *nods* I wrote a relatively "clean" M/S/L a while ago, Bitter Raspberries. Then, it took me months to come up with another one because there are so many possibilities, combinations and levels of slashiness, I didn't know where to start. Apparently, now, I'm on a quest to write said possibilities, combinations and levels on slashiness :-p

Thank you for the feedback!

PS: Oh, your icon! Badass!Sara ♥ That pic of her is one of the few good things S4 brought us.

[melanyebaggins]

uhhm. yeah. Bitter Raspberries has been happily in my 'stash' for a long while now ;) I had been innocently (yeah right lol) searching for some hot Sarah/Linc fics, and I backed into that one...which completely blew my penchant for smut wide open :P Now I completely adore that fic (which was my very first M/S/L fic of all time, you naughty girl you ;) )

EEE! I watch that ep PURELY for that epic shot of her and Michael closing the trunk on Mummy Scofield :D She looked so damn hot in Season 4 *siiiiighs*

[clair_de_lune]

Aww, I've corrupted you ;-) I'm not sure I should gloat about it, but well...
Of course you were searching innocently for hot Lincoln/Sara. The search for smut is always an innocent one *g* I'm afraid my L/S is scarce and not so hot, that said. domfangirl's LJ is a way better spot for it.

I'm not a fan of the fourth season (understatement), but Sara certainly had her moments in it.

[lizparker6]

I really shouldnt be enjoying this as much as I do. *grins*

And although as I stated many times before, I would prefer Michael and Sara alone, I will take whatever youll get me, for your PRON!WRITING skills are simply genius. There, I said it, and I am not taking it back.:)

[clair_de_lune]

You're just attuned to Sara who, given the circumstances, probably shouldn't enjoy it so much either ;)

[whispers] Come to the dark side... [/whispers]

[lizparker6]

LOLOL

*hears the sparkly pull of the 'dark side'*

I think I will stay for a little while in the middle, but thank you for the invite, you evil witch! ;))