Prison Break - Working Out the Chill

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Working Out the Chill
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln
Category: Het
Rating: NC-17
Warning: No actual slash/incest but proceed with caution if Michael/Lincoln really bothers you.
Word Count: ~ 2200
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: She was cold, and not sure the weather was entirely responsible for that

Comments

[clair_de_lune]

Thank foophile for that ;) And there was another M/S/L prompt from her... *sighs* Maybe next round, or for the amnesty round.

And I did enjoy the boys undressing each other and indulging in a little fondling!

I'm SO surprised!

Sara was a real trooper about it too; not exactly loving it but not hating it either. :)

Initially, the fic was supposed to be more angsty, less smutty and a bit more slashy. And Sara being all angsty was supposed to be not surprised but also not to care that much about what the two of them were doing to each other: her relative indifference here is a leftover from my first 'plan'.
Thing is, as illogical as it sounds, I usually need a 'founding fic' for a pairing (or threesome in this case), even if the fics I write after it are totally not related to it. I still haven't written my founding slashy M/S/L story, hence I couldn't amp up the slash here.

I know. Between this 'logic' and my editing-mania, I'm hopeless. But I don't pretend to make sense, huh! *g*

As for her angst subsiding faster than planned, I guess it means Sara's self-calming technics are efficient :-p

my ever-growing top ten list

It's funny you mention such a list because I've thinking about stealing an idea from someone on my flist and asking peeps recs of their favorite fics (theirs an others) and authors in various fandoms to put together a list.

Thanks for the comment, Foxy - and for the fastest beta on Earth ;-)

[tuesdaeschild]

And there was another M/S/L prompt from her...

Well done, foophile Erm...oh dear!

I'm SO surprised!

I thought you might be. ;)

her relative indifference here is a leftover from my first 'plan'

I think it would have worked 'angsty' too...especially with being more slashy! But I think you struck a very nice balance.

I still haven't written my founding slashy M/S/L story, hence I couldn't amp up the slash here.

But you are still looking, of course. :)

Between this 'logic' and my editing-mania, I'm hopeless.

Oh no!! Not hopeless at all! It's just that you edit; constantly. And I save; everywhere. ;)

I guess it means Sara's self-calming technics are efficient :-p

Hmmmm, maybe we could take a leaf from her book? ;)

asking peeps recs of their favorite fics (theirs an others) and authors in various fandoms to put together a list.

That sounds like a good idea. I'm up for it. :)

You know you're welcome for both the comment and the fastest beta on Earth...I can be zippy when the occasion demands it!! ;)

*hugs*

[clair_de_lune]

But you are still looking, of course. :)

Indeed. I have been, not later than this afternoon :-p
And I may I've come up with something for a slashy threesome I've been considering for a while. I wanted to write it in Michael's POV but Sara's voice kept popping up. I may have managed to shut her down.

Oh no!! Not hopeless at all! It's just that you edit; constantly. And I save; everywhere. ;)

*high fives you* On the other hand, this fic in particular has been written, beta'ed and fixed within a day. I won't pretend I wouldn't have liked to tweak it a bit longer but I haven't and *gasps* my world didn't stop ;-)

That sounds like a good idea. I'm up for it. :)

Instead of merely posting an entry, I may become obsessive and obnoxious about it, and send emails or PM to my flisters to be sure to reach them (I know how I am). So for now, I'm still pondering the idea ^_^

[tuesdaeschild]

And I may I've come up with something for a slashy threesome I've been considering for a while.

Oh! That sounds rather encouraging! Sara, shut the f*** up!!

I won't pretend I wouldn't have liked to tweak it a bit longer but I haven't and *gasps* my world didn't stop ;-)

There you go!! There was never any reason to worry that it might!!Now, maybe I should emulate you and stop saving everything everywhere?

I may become obsessive and obnoxious about it, and send emails or PM to my flisters to be sure to reach them.

*cackles* That's the ticket, dear!! Don't give anyone any excuse!!

But I think it's a sound idea and I'm willing to go along with it. :)

Ah! I love the edit button! A lot!

[clair_de_lune]

*nods* I'm all for Sara expressing herself loud and clear except when Lincoln muzzles her, but she did that recently in the third Blue Moon, the Vanilla fic and the Chill one. I want the story to be about Michael needing the two of them, not about Sara freaking out, so It has to be in Michael's POV ^_^

maybe I should emulate you

Oh, my! I'm not an example to follow, whatever the matter is *g*

LOL. Seriously. Three edits? Or is it just LJ going crazy in my inbox? *hugs*

[tuesdaeschild]

I want the story to be about Michael needing the two of them, not about Sara freaking out, so It has to be in Michael's POV

I very much love the idea of Michael needing both of them! But would that be in a sexual way or not?!!

Oh, my! I'm not an example to follow, whatever the matter is *g*

Just let me be the judge of that, dear! *g*

Yes, three edits!!! Sometimes I really like to push the boat out!! *crosses fingers this one is okay* :)

[clair_de_lune]

But would that be in a sexual way or not?!!
*scratches head* Let me think...

(You know, I made that poor trio userpic for a totally innocent fic, Back to Chicago. Now, I use it for the M/S/L NC-17 stuff... *sigh*)

[tuesdaeschild]

Lol!

Oh well at least that icon is getting plenty of use! ;)