Prison Break - Working Out the Chill

Jul 14, 2010 17:37

Title: Working Out the Chill
Author: clair-de-lune
Characters: Michael/Sara/Lincoln
Category: Het
Rating: NC-17
Warning: No actual slash/incest but proceed with caution if Michael/Lincoln really bothers you.
Word Count: ~ 2200
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: She was cold, and not sure the weather was entirely responsible for that ( Read more... )

fanfic: english, pairing: michael/sara, fic: one shot, pairing: michael/lincoln, fandom: prison break, category: pwp, comm: rounds_of_kink, category: threesome, pairing: michael/sara/lincoln, pairing: lincoln/sara

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clair_de_lune July 18 2010, 09:46:04 UTC
First, let me say that, while writing this, I read your "Before I Wake" story, which is so delicious and tender that my smutty OT3 PWP and I felt a bit sleazy. I'll live, though, no worries *g*

I love how Sara just needs.
Sometimes, the only way to evacuate things is to work them out physically. She could either beat up Kellerman, hit or break something (which she did/will do in S4) or go for a more plesant resolution. Given this was written for a kink comm... :-p

SPANKING! Just guh.
LOL. Glad you approve *g*

As I was saying to Foxy in another comment, initially, the fic was supposed to be a bit more slashy, Sara a bit more angsty because of Kellerman and kind of "yeah, whatever" about the brothers being too affectionate with one another. Basically, I chickened out and I'm sorry there isn't the amount of slash I had planned. I guess it means I'll have to try again ;-) I want to write my really slashy OT3, damn!

Because it's so secret Sara.

There are a few occasions on the show - too rare - where we can see how badass she may be. Aiming for the weak knee of that guy in the riots episode and knowing how much it will hurt since she'd been treaing him? "Ironing" Kellerman? Threatening to slice open Gretchen's throat? She killed Kim for Lincoln and Christina for Michael - I'm not sure the brothers returned this kind of favor. So all that plus the "not a good girl comment" in the first season... I guess, in a PWP, it was bound to end up quite smuttily. That said, I think my only fics as graphic as this one involving were the third Blue Moon and a Sara/Gretchen femslash story. From there to say that Lincoln and Gretchen appeal to Sara's base instincts... ^__^

There are a couple of things I'm not happy with (the way I used the kink, the fact that I wanted to insist more on Kellerman being in the next room), but it turned out not as bad as I feared, especially given how quickly I wrote it :-/ I'm so glad you liked it *hugs*

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