Dean`s Day Chapter 2

[capricorn86]

Title: Dean`s Day Chapter 2
Author: Capricorn86
Characters: Dean Winchester, Melissa, Will (3) Dawn (5)
Disclaimer: I own nothing (apart from my OCs). No profit is being made.
Warning: Contains mild spanking and swearing
Author`s Note: Based on a prompt from Remisfriend26.

Chapter 1: http://capricorn86.livejournal.com/31570.html
Chapter 2: http://

Comments

[brassband777]

You already know that Will is my favourite, but even if he hadn't been, I reckon he would have been now after the way you portrayed him in this chapter. Hee hee. Little Will is absolutely ADORABLE!!!!!!! I wanna take him home

[capricorn86]

hehehe!! Aww :D Thank you!
It was so much fun to write little Will, I got a lot of inspiration from wee!Sammy (and your fics!) when I wrote this.
I was a bit stuck on this part, so I went and read two of your fics: Road Safety and Tantrums on the Road. Writing went much more smoothly after that, lol.

Your comment on Melissa amused me. I reckon she must have been a "better person" early on in her and Dean`s relationship, I mean... Dean must have loved her, they did live together for several years and had two children. Things just changed, I suppose, and when Dean left her, Melissa just turned.. bitter and cold towards him.

I had a great time picturing Dean sitting cross-legged in Dawn`s pink bedroom playing with her and her dolls. <3 hehehe! I figured he`d want to spend some one-on-one time with each of the kids, and since he`d already been at the playground with Will, it was now Dawn`s turn to bask in the light of her father`s attention. :)

[brassband777]

I'm sure your writing smoothly had nothing to do with reading my fics. lol. I was actually thinking about those two stories along with A Winchester Christmas the other day,as I was trying to figure out which were my favourite stories that I'd written....and they won. Simply because I adore writing toddler Sammy! Hee hee. (Time Switch is my other favourite, but for a different reason. Which of your stories are your favourites, or do you like them all the same?

Yeah, I agree that Dean must have loved her at some point (otherwise she'd have been just a one night stand! Ha ha), because he did commit to her. I can imagine how hard it was for him to actually make the break though, knowing he'd see his babies less and lose out on their growing up :(

[capricorn86]

I disagree, I think it had everything to do with that, hehe

[winchesterlove2]

awww i just love these sooooo very much! i think i really enjoy whenever Dean thinks about how much of a heartbreaker Will is going to be when he's older--especially since you did writer him as a heartbreaker (just a different sense lol)

I also love the description of Will as being what Dean remembers of the good times with Melissa. Made me want to cuddle a baby myself lol

[capricorn86]

I`m glad you love it. :) hehe
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment!