Dean`s Day Chapter 2

[capricorn86]

Title: Dean`s Day Chapter 2
Author: Capricorn86
Characters: Dean Winchester, Melissa, Will (3) Dawn (5)
Disclaimer: I own nothing (apart from my OCs). No profit is being made.
Warning: Contains mild spanking and swearing
Author`s Note: Based on a prompt from Remisfriend26.

Chapter 1: http://capricorn86.livejournal.com/31570.html
Chapter 2: http://

Comments

[brassband777]

You already know that Will is my favourite, but even if he hadn't been, I reckon he would have been now after the way you portrayed him in this chapter. Hee hee. Little Will is absolutely ADORABLE!!!!!!! I wanna take him home

[capricorn86]

hehehe!! Aww :D Thank you!
It was so much fun to write little Will, I got a lot of inspiration from wee!Sammy (and your fics!) when I wrote this.
I was a bit stuck on this part, so I went and read two of your fics: Road Safety and Tantrums on the Road. Writing went much more smoothly after that, lol.

Your comment on Melissa amused me. I reckon she must have been a "better person" early on in her and Dean`s relationship, I mean... Dean must have loved her, they did live together for several years and had two children. Things just changed, I suppose, and when Dean left her, Melissa just turned.. bitter and cold towards him.

I had a great time picturing Dean sitting cross-legged in Dawn`s pink bedroom playing with her and her dolls. <3 hehehe! I figured he`d want to spend some one-on-one time with each of the kids, and since he`d already been at the playground with Will, it was now Dawn`s turn to bask in the light of her father`s attention. :)

[brassband777]

I'm sure your writing smoothly had nothing to do with reading my fics. lol. I was actually thinking about those two stories along with A Winchester Christmas the other day,as I was trying to figure out which were my favourite stories that I'd written....and they won. Simply because I adore writing toddler Sammy! Hee hee. (Time Switch is my other favourite, but for a different reason. Which of your stories are your favourites, or do you like them all the same?

Yeah, I agree that Dean must have loved her at some point (otherwise she'd have been just a one night stand! Ha ha), because he did commit to her. I can imagine how hard it was for him to actually make the break though, knowing he'd see his babies less and lose out on their growing up :(

[capricorn86]

I disagree, I think it had everything to do with that, hehe

[brassband777]

Which of your stories are my favourites......now that is a difficult question, as I honestly love ALL of your stories! I had a good think and a flick through your journal to remind myself of all your fics. Hee hee. So here goes (in no particular order. lol)these are fics that I especially loved (many of them you will realise contain tiny Sammy. Hee hee: the one where little Sammy was supposed to be playing quietly, but didn't; the one where little Dean runs away from Mary in the supermarket and asks her to catch him (I remember John changed sam's dirty diaper. Hee hee); Checkmate has a special place in my heart too (loved the family relationships between the family members here); Dean's Day; Broken (I just love Will. Ha ha); the one where Emily stayed over at uncle Dean's and they played up in the supermarket and had a pillow fight; Someday at Christmas there'll be no tears (this was very emotive); Sam Winchester is not amused (felt so much for Sam in this); Fears and Feelings (wee Sam - awww); Dawn and Will at Uncle Sam's when they

[capricorn86]

Thank you! :)
You have every reason to be proud of Time Switch, and not just because it`s long! lol

Oh I LOVE Candy Capers. Love it! :D

Hmm.. When Dad Came Home is probably the one I`m most proud of because it was so hard and emotionally draining to write. In my personal opinion, it came out as a powerful story in the end.

[brassband777]

Am I right in thinking 'When Dad Came Home' was the fic set after Sam ran away to Flagstaff and you had both Dean and Sam's point of view? If it's that one....then yeah, it was powerful, in fact, that would be an understatement - it literally smashed my heart to smithereens. I'm not surprised you're proud of it - you have every right to be! That fic hooked me right in and it had such an impact that I was left feeling really disturbed and heavy-hearted afterwards. It's a testament to your amazing writing ability that you can evoke such strong emotions in a reader. From a literary point of view, it was outstandingly brilliant, it's only not a favourite of mine, because as you know, I'm a sucker for happy endings. lol.

[capricorn86]

Yeah, that`s the one. *blushes at the praise* Thank you. :)