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[recurrence]

Next batch! As a note, the batches close after fifty or so votes come in. Please be patient! There's no weeding this round.

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. Closed!

Comments

[kick_up_a_notch]

Voted on what I knew.

Mid-boss, Sain: IN.

Mid-boss, I will say that the constant use of 'moi' is a little grating, but I recall him using that quite a bit (blah and I'm only in chapter 5 of Disgaea 1).

Sain, the canon sounds about right, and for the most part your app made me smile and laugh, so it was an in.

In for Setsuna

[kick_up_a_notch]

In for Setsuna too, since she was on the edge, and it all sounded good to me.

[marezydoats]

OUT to Ed Wuncler III, Kagura, Toto, and Sain.

Just a note to Toto, but Quistis is from FFVIII, not VII.

Sain

[marezydoats]

Concrit, please? (I know it was insanely long. T_T I didn't really intend for it to go that way.)

Toto apper

[marezydoats]

Oh dammit. XD I looked over that so many times and still messed up something. Bleh! Well, may I have some concrit please~?

[on_target]

Ed OUT, Setsuna IN, Kagura and Chris OUT, Vyers ABSTAIN, Toto OUT, Sain IN.

Ask here if you want to know why.

Kagura apper

[on_target]

Concrit please

Re: Kagura apper

[monkwithgun]

Your voice was disjoined and mainly came off as a pale imitation of Tomo. And we already have a Tomo.

Re: Kagura apper

[on_target]

Thanks. For whatever reason, I can't seem to get my stuff to ever link well together. Go figure... But like I said, thanks again.

[classprotector]

All out again and stuff uh ask.

Kagura apper

[classprotector]

Concrit please.

Re: Kagura apper

[classprotector]

As Omi said, it was pretty disjointed, and left me with very little idea of what Kagura would do in camp. Going from one sports event to another trying to beat everyone just...isn't that engaging, and there just wasn't anything other than that in the app. The conversation with the rival was also weird, just because the rival seemed very much to be a gorilla, but s/he kept explaining things. Which...gorillas don't do here, that I've ever seen. They're purple, but not talking. Also, while it very well might be canon, I don't know, the sheer number of times you used the word "rival" was...not ideal? Just seeing the word that many times (especially since they were often very close together) makes the app seem repetitive, and it just sort of a pet peeve of mine to not use the same word that often if you can help it. It also didn't help with the issue of "how would the character interact," since it gave me at least something of a feeling of "this character will interact with the person she identifies as a rival and not much with

Chris Apper

[classprotector]

If you wouldn't mind, I could use any concrit you can spare.

[cockroachangel]

W-WHA--

WHAT--

SETCHAAAAAAAAAAN!

[_overshadowed_]

Your boyfriend is here~~~~. ♥

[cockroachangel]

Ari Ari look it's the retarded Messiah!

[_overshadowed_]

Does HE have money to pay for your nicotine?