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Comments

Re: Kagura apper

[classprotector]

As Omi said, it was pretty disjointed, and left me with very little idea of what Kagura would do in camp. Going from one sports event to another trying to beat everyone just...isn't that engaging, and there just wasn't anything other than that in the app. The conversation with the rival was also weird, just because the rival seemed very much to be a gorilla, but s/he kept explaining things. Which...gorillas don't do here, that I've ever seen. They're purple, but not talking. Also, while it very well might be canon, I don't know, the sheer number of times you used the word "rival" was...not ideal? Just seeing the word that many times (especially since they were often very close together) makes the app seem repetitive, and it just sort of a pet peeve of mine to not use the same word that often if you can help it. It also didn't help with the issue of "how would the character interact," since it gave me at least something of a feeling of "this character will interact with the person she identifies as a rival and not much with other people!" Hope that helps.