The Thin Ice 3/3

[buffyaddict13]

Title: The Thin Ice 3/3
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Sam, Dean, OFC, OMC / gen, no pairing
Summary: An average hunt turns deadly when a mysterious hunter kidnaps Sam and Dean, determined to exorcise a demon from Sam in order to "save" him. Sam and Dean insist Sam's not possessed but Libby doesn't believe them, and with good

Comments

[kuhekabir]

I enjoyed reading it...but man, Libby was stupid, really, I just wanted to shake her, how stupid can you get? lol...I really enjoyed it...Thanks for sharing :)

[buffyaddict13]

thank you very much for taking the time to read my fic AND for taking the time to comment on it!

i'm sorry you thought libby was stupid though. i was trying to get across that she was mentally ill and suffered from magical thinking.

Thanks for sharing :)

you're welcome. thanks for reading.

[kuhekabir]

She was? That explains it...lol...thanks :)

[estei]

OMFG. JANET.

Baby... I have no words for how much this story kicks ass. NO WORDS. The dialogue, the language, seriously, I am in awe of you. AWE.

*flails*

[buffyaddict13]

THANK YOU KAREN!!

i think it would have been even better if libby hadn't been quite so stupid though. ALAS.

*clings*

at least i didn't get a thesis about it.

[estei]

Did you get my e-mail???

Now, you know me and how I hate OCs. No, it's true, I really do and when you first talked about this story I was like, "Well, I know I'm going to love it because my beb is a fantastic writer and I love reading her CM fic and I'm not even in that fandom, but I don't know how much I will like this Libby character."

HA. I loved her. She is such a sympathetic character, with her childhood and the very real loss of her mother and the loss of that connection and the way that her relationship with Dell doesn't seem quite healthy or right and the way you set him up against John Winchester to look like a better father but really there is all this stuff that hints that he's really doing the same thing to Libby... ARG. SO MANY LAYERS. LIKE A GODDAMN DELICIOUS FIC CAKE. And she's so crazy, and yet you write her in such a way that she's not difficult to understand, which is SO HARD when writing crazy people.

Sam looks at her with his eclipse eye and whispers OMFG. This is what I mean by your language. Even here, it's

[buffyaddict13]

then i'm extra glad you liked this. i'm always leery of oc's as well. unless you or refur write them.

DUDE. now i want cake.

sam's secret power is an eclipse eye. it's how he's going to save dean. *nod*

♥

Re: i liked a lot your bringing kate back

[buffyaddict13]

oh yay! thank you so much cat! ♥

i was nervous about bringing kate back, so i'm thrilled you liked it. and i would love to have a vampire bite sam and be poisoned by him. *wants*

thank you for taking the time to read this and comment. i appreciate it sweetie.

*hug*

[buffyaddict13]

*beams*

oh THANK YOU for the lovely feedback! i'm so glad you took a chance on my fic--and liked it.

thank you! you just made my day. <3

[kroki_refur]

YAY! YOU POSTED IT! *twirls you*

Oh, baby, this is so awesome! I like it even more this time through (is that even possible? My mind, she is blown!) You win!

Also, that artwork is pretty snazzy. *heads over to comment*

[buffyaddict13]

OMFG HI!!!

*clings to your ankle*

HOW ARE YOU? i miss you like the biggest missing thing ever!

♥ ♥ ♥

[kroki_refur]

I'm good! I just got back after a ten hour journey and I got to read your fic again! Well, OK, I haven't finished reading it again yet, but I wanted to tell you how awesome it was anyway. \o/

I had a fab weekend, but man, am I tired. And I've got some school stuff to do tonight and work tomorrow. I think I need a new life...

How are YOU? Did you see FIREWORKS?

[estei]

FAB AND DRUNKEN, RIGHT?