The Thin Ice 3/3

[buffyaddict13]

Title: The Thin Ice 3/3
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Sam, Dean, OFC, OMC / gen, no pairing
Summary: An average hunt turns deadly when a mysterious hunter kidnaps Sam and Dean, determined to exorcise a demon from Sam in order to "save" him. Sam and Dean insist Sam's not possessed but Libby doesn't believe them, and with good

Comments

[estei]

Did you get my e-mail???

Now, you know me and how I hate OCs. No, it's true, I really do and when you first talked about this story I was like, "Well, I know I'm going to love it because my beb is a fantastic writer and I love reading her CM fic and I'm not even in that fandom, but I don't know how much I will like this Libby character."

HA. I loved her. She is such a sympathetic character, with her childhood and the very real loss of her mother and the loss of that connection and the way that her relationship with Dell doesn't seem quite healthy or right and the way you set him up against John Winchester to look like a better father but really there is all this stuff that hints that he's really doing the same thing to Libby... ARG. SO MANY LAYERS. LIKE A GODDAMN DELICIOUS FIC CAKE. And she's so crazy, and yet you write her in such a way that she's not difficult to understand, which is SO HARD when writing crazy people.

Sam looks at her with his eclipse eye and whispers OMFG. This is what I mean by your language. Even here, it's so fucking beautiful and descriptive but it also works as a character piece for Libby. HOW DO YOU DO THAT? OMG SAM'S ECLIPSE EYE.

And I told you the first time I read it, but I still get fucking shivers when Dean comes up behind her, cuffs dangling from his wrist.

MWAH!

[buffyaddict13]

then i'm extra glad you liked this. i'm always leery of oc's as well. unless you or refur write them.

DUDE. now i want cake.

sam's secret power is an eclipse eye. it's how he's going to save dean. *nod*

♥