The Voice of an Angel

[bestplace]

Title: The Voice of an Angel
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: Angst, romance
Rating: G
Word Count: 650
Summary: Two years have gone by.

Comments

[cuethemusicc]

NO NO NO FUCK YOU NO
I'm like legitimately teary eyed, how do you always do it!? This short 650 word drabble contained so much more plot and emotion than should be possible. The feeling of the fic was chilling. The way Jonghyun can't accept Key is gone. The responses of the wind. And I love how you don't really figure out what's happening until mid fic. Man, and everything ties in too. You're a genius with drawing the title, the gravestone, and what Jonghyun "hears" together.
God that was unexpectedly beautiful. Like, not that I don't expect your writing to be beautiful, but generally I don't really like to read drabbles because they usually leave an empty feeling when I'm done reading them, like there should be more, but you managed to make it perfect (my sentences tend to run on and on forever with your reviews because of feels ;~;)

You are one of the most genuinely talented writers I've seen write fanfiction, and I will be genuinely upset if you don't end up publishing something that I will buy a million copies of. It would be such a waste considering how amazing you are stylistically and your ability to portray such intense emotions without dragging on with unnecessary droning.
And are you bragging by saying angst is not your forte? Because this was amazing you writing wizard. AND GOD WHY DID I NOT READ THE GENRE I WAS PREPARED FOR FLUFF NOT THIS NOT THESE FEELS GOD IT STINGS.

you owe me another heart. you broke this one beyond recognition. help

And babe, please don't be sad. It makes me sad okay? You deserve to be happy always. I know we don't talk all that often but if you ever need to talk , listening is one of the few things I'm good at ^^ That saying about your mother is really sweet. It's always beautiful when people incorporate something close to them in their writing.
<3
And it may be the bias speaking again but I agree with everything you said about Key's voice. I wish he had more parts during slower songs. I mean his raps are good too, but his singing...

[cuethemusicc]

damn wtf is wrong with me, I thought I was going to write a short response but it's like I physically can't write short comments to your fics.

[bestplace]

let's pretend that this reply isn't 100000000 years late okay? OKAY! ♥ OTL

OMFG I'm so happy that you think that way, you don't even know. hearing that the feeling I wanted for this fic was a success is a big deal to me. especially since it's coming from you. <3

I'm so glad it didn't feel empty afterwards, too!! ;;

oh god you're making me melt rn ;;; THANK YOU!!! T____T

I will talk to you if I ever need to. c: thank you for being there, bb.
yes his singing. *u* his deep voice is my favorite, I wish they'd show it off more. it's beautiful, really.

thank you so so much for reading and commenting! ;w; ♥