After much deliberation...

[eerisedda]

I finally decided that I was just going to spork this GaaLee fic, because it seriously needs to be done and because I am procrastinating on packing for my big, cross-country move (time for another good idea, bad idea!) Admittedly, it is not the worst fic out there. It really has potential, if only the author would learn to use proper grammar, stop

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[whm_koorii]

Every time I see a character get called by the pet name "Angel" in a fic, I tend to head desk. I'm sure it can be used well somewhere, if it's IC for the character, or in certain situations, but most of the time, eh...

Although, now I'm imagining Lee standing there with a glowing background sunset, declaring that Gaara is an "Angel of glorious youth who will stand beside me against these villains who dare try to destroy our most wonderful nations!" while Gaara gives him this :| look.

I'm not into this pairing, but I find the mental image strangely adorable.

Edited for a couple misplaced words.

[eerisedda]

It is an adorable pairing, and I know I am biased, but it's just the cutest thing ever because they are so contrasting, and somehow balance each other out, and Lee's physical appeal isn't exactly typical, so for someone like Gaara to like him makes sense. And for someone like Lee, who has fought Gaara, it's just an amazing ship. But obviously it isn't everyone's cup of tea. And I am sorry to talk your ear off about it. >_<

Honestly, the way you have Lee referring to Gaara as an angel is adorable and so in character. The way it was done in this fic... not so much. Mostly just obnoxiously OoC.

[whm_koorii]

I don't mind at all, we're all allowed to gush over our OTPs, after all. ;P

And I agree, Gaara would need someone unusual, I think, to get be able to get over his history as a heartless monster as well as all the other baggage he comes with. XD Lee is lovable 'cause he's so quirky. The Sand Sibs, Team Gai, and Team 8 (I think that's the Kiba-Hinata-Shino team, right?) were always my favorite teams from Naruto.

I'm glad you think so, since I haven't really touched anything Naruto in a couple of years. Ha ha...

[eerisedda]

haha. I guess that's true. And goodness knows I adore them. Separately and together.

I am glad you at least can see why they would work! :) I've seen comments people have made about how people only ship them because they fought. Which has nothing to do with it, at least, for me. I just see their personalities going well together. :)

haha. Well, it was very in charaacter, so good job.

[l3abiel3lues]

I LOVE it when they write about taste. It almost never make sense xD

[eerisedda]

I KNOW! haha. It's like, you do realise that, unless someone ate chocolate really recently, they won't taste like it, and when you get to the skin... unless it's food sex, they won't taste sweet like honey.

-sigh- People and their weird taste fetishes.

[tomato_dance]

Oh god. It was so damned purple. Quit it! Seriously. This isn't a grade eight poetry contest. Simple sentences are fine.

And stop saying "waterfall" FFS.

[dandywonderous]

AUGH, THE METAPHORS, THEY'RE INVADING!!!

RUN TO THE HILLS! HIDE YOUR WIVES AND CHILDREN!!!

[girlontherage]

Does he roll around in cinnamon? Apparently Suna is not made of sand, it is made of cinnamon. He is actually Gaara of the Cinnamon. This is one of Suna's most well kept secrets.

No. It's candy. Gaara's come is candy. He is made of cinnamon and candy; he is sweet and delicious.

Because nothing says sexy like a batch of mother's freshly baked brownies! Hmm, bite me off a piece of that! -headdesk-

Oh dear lord, these sporks made me laugh the most. Gaara of the Cinnamon...that just puts weird images in my head. Like he runs around selling cinnabons or something like that. xD Yup, instead of kunai and shuriken, it is now cinnasticks and cinnabuns.

[eerisedda]

hahahahahahahaha. OHMYGOD! I WANT FANART OF THAT SO BADLY! haha.

I am so glad that those sporks made you laugh. I think those were my favourite a well. :) I was actually funny for once. >_<

[girlontherage]

hahahah, that would be some awesome fan art xD

mmmm tasty cinnamon

[eerisedda]

It will be my mission to find someone to make it! And if I do not find someone I will do a thousand push-ups!