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Dear... You,
Please stop telling me what a great writer you are. You're not. I can't stand to read your posts, for reasons of quality and content. Your character, alone, accounts for at least 10 deaths by violence. The current homicide rate is about 10/ 100,000. Go find another ten out of 100,000 to kill off. This is a modern day, real world setting. Cops just can't kill that many people
Further, when you write about your character shooting a "pinto," I have wild images of your character shooting a really huge bean. I know that you really mean a Pinto, which is a car, but now I find it hard to take your character seriously. Besides, what did that poor car ever do to you?
No love,
Me
Please stop telling me what a great writer you are. You're not. I can't stand to read your posts, for reasons of quality and content. Your character, alone, accounts for at least 10 deaths by violence. The current homicide rate is about 10/ 100,000. Go find another ten out of 100,000 to kill off. This is a modern day, real world setting. Cops just can't kill that many people
Further, when you write about your character shooting a "pinto," I have wild images of your character shooting a really huge bean. I know that you really mean a Pinto, which is a car, but now I find it hard to take your character seriously. Besides, what did that poor car ever do to you?
No love,
Me