ジタバタ純情 - Chapter 19: The Bachelor!

Dec 12, 2008 23:49

Title:ジタバタ純情 ("Struggling Pure Heart.") - Chapter 19: The Bachelor!
Pairings: A few.
Fandom: Hey!Say! JUMP, Johnny's Junior
Genre: Angst, fluff
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: Boys in love with each other?
Disclaimer: HAAHAHAHAHHAHAA. No.
Summary: Yabu and Hikaru try hard. Too hard at times. And you have a say in this story, reader-chan.

Well, we have a deal for you! A boy you can't refuse, JUMP's one and only Takaki Yuya! )

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chibilover14 December 14 2008, 07:34:32 UTC
Heehee... read like all 19 chapters at once. *brain melts yet wants to read more* XD
I seriously love it so far! It made me laugh, sad, happy... just a bunch of different emotions! XD You practically have all the genres here! XD But awesome job on this and I look forward to the next chappy! ♥
This fic has been the most amusing one I have ever read!

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asa_chan_love December 14 2008, 15:21:32 UTC
All nineteen at once!? Are you insane, woman?! XD

Though, I'm happy you ♥ it!

...the most amusing? .////. Thank you very much for reading~ I hope I can close the poll soon to post the next chapter soon. Did you vote?

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chibilover14 December 14 2008, 16:47:50 UTC
Apparently I am. XD But I couldn't help if your writing style was so awesome plus your plot ish amusing! XD Then I told some friends to read it. xP

*twirls* I'm more happy that I got to read it! What was on your mind when you wrote all of this? XD

It was amusing yet angsty yet fluffy... just all over. XD Don't worry! It's a good thing! That means it catches my interest and I'll stalk this journal now! I never read a multichap this long either! When are you closing the poll? xP Of course I did!

You made Takaki sound like some kind of product. Made me ROFL Oh my... I made a long comment again... sowwie! *disappears*

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asa_chan_love December 14 2008, 17:31:34 UTC
OMG, you're making me blush.

What was on my mind? Well, a lot of things. First off, an RP I played in where Hasshi and Chinen fought for Takaki. Second, JJE shoots where Takaki and Hasshi look really close to each other, and finally, the Hey!Say Making when Chinen is on Takaki's lap and looks happeh. And I went all "Wait, OMG, Chinen stole Takaki from Hasshi! I'd hate him foreverz!"

I read a 42 chapter fic once, but it was a marvelous fic. I consider the writer my senpai and I really started writing after reading her fic. I should find the fic/that writer again, she was awesomeness.

Oh, and... the poll? As soon as possible, even if I really know who's going to win.

And, yeah, well. I liked the idea of 'selling' Takaki, so that's what I did with him. XD And long comments are okay, I love them!

BTW, did you write Hontou ni Rabu?

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eemir_eera December 14 2008, 10:38:55 UTC
huwaaa........Finally...It took almost 3 hours for me to read everything....^_^...But huwaaa...the ending..the ending so sad.....Why??..why??....T-T.....I cant wait for the next chapter...Hope I can read it soon..haha...^_^...Great chapter I told you...^_^...

p/s : ILUSM for this chapter..^_^

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asa_chan_love December 14 2008, 15:22:28 UTC
Three hours? O_O

Oh, yeah, the next chapter should come soon. When I close the poll, and I don't even know when I will close it.

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kira_shadow December 14 2008, 12:24:12 UTC
looking at the polling results I guess the TakaYama fans on this community rule supreme behind the TakaChii ones? lol that's uncreative! (btw you should have put up a box saying "Other - Please Specify in Comments" just to see what people would come up with *fufu*)



awesome chapter X3
and uh yeah I'm procrastinating...
*will go back to studying in a minute*

btw my inner Kouhei just came up with the idea of a "Boyfriend for Sale" or "Boyfriend Auction" or something...involving someone going "Ugh, I'll give you 5000yen if you shut up!" - "And then you'll get this spiffy young chap for free!" - "Whatever..." - "Here you go!" - "What the...who mentioned having him handcuffed to me??" - "See it as a little help from the god of love!" - "What the fuck are you on?? HEY!" - "SAY!JUMP!" - "Oh fuck you....."

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asa_chan_love December 14 2008, 15:11:16 UTC
OMGLOLILU. <3

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kira_shadow December 14 2008, 17:49:07 UTC
ILUSM TU->YU
*gets whacked*

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asa_chan_love December 14 2008, 19:27:48 UTC
...No, never again. Lame. Lame. Lamer than cheese.

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lesth December 14 2008, 18:17:44 UTC
This chapter was funny!!!
Since the lasts chapters, I thought longer about Yabu with Kamei, and now I loooove! I'm going to reread and appreciate even more!

I wanted Yuya back with Hasshi... But a takaHiro or a Kitahiro would be unusual and very interessant!
*happy to see the competition between Tegoshi and Yamada*

And it is a great idea to do this poll!! =]
I wish you to have fun writing the end :)

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asa_chan_love December 14 2008, 19:17:49 UTC
You like Yabu and Kamei? GREAT. NOW SOMEONE ELSE SEES THE GENIUS IN THIS PAIRING.

So, you voted for Kitayama? (Esther, on dit 'interesting' en Anglais, 'interessant' c'est en Français, en passant.)

Of course~ Thanks for reading~ And it's actually not the end yet, just that I ran out of idea and I wanted people to have a say in the story.

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lesth December 14 2008, 21:11:05 UTC
LOOOL!!! And such genius in this pairing, where did you get the idea from?

I voted for Kitayama and Tegoshi lol
(-____-* I use interesting when I think in english, but it seems like my hand keep on writing in french anyway... sorry, I'll be more careful! ^^)

Yaaaaaaaaaaayyy!! I'm happy it's not the end!! This fic is so great!! =)
I hope the poll will help you ^^
Finally, if there were two of the guys you proposed, fighting for Yuya (since yamada and tegoshi are almost leading the poll) it would be funny XD

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asa_chan_love December 15 2008, 03:09:50 UTC
RPing. When Kira (Kira_shadow) was still a member in Hayashi, Yabu and Kamei were in love with each other and they were the cutest/cheesiest pairing ever. Oh, and I tiny bit of them acting couple-ish in SC, I don't even remember when, but Kira and I went all "SEE, THEY ARE CANON." (And that's okay, you'll get the hang of it.)

No, no. Not the end. Definitely not.
Well, Tegoshi and Shoon are leading now. Yamada and Kitayama are right behind them... and fighting? Naaaah~

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yamada_love December 15 2008, 01:34:34 UTC
← Special icon for this comment!! (o^_^o)
I just read all 19 chapters
*wants to read more xD*
Looks like Yamada Ryosuke is in the lead.
Sorry, I'm a bit biased when it comes to Yamada Ryosuke OTPS
*gets shot*

Please update soon ne~?

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asa_chan_love December 15 2008, 03:01:30 UTC
Cute icon!

No worries, I'll close the poll soon and get to writing the next chapter. I'm already writing it actually, many version, depending on the winner.

Weirdly, Yamada isn't leading anymore. O_O This will change by tomorrow, I'm pretty sure. XD I'd be amazed if someone like Kyomoto won. XD

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yamada_love December 16 2008, 04:51:43 UTC
I cant wait for the next chappy ^_^

I'm ecstatic just thinking about it xD
*goes to get help*

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