FICLETS: Commentfics of Silliness (aka I AM 12)

[anodyna]

Why hello again! These are two silly commentfics I wrote for Ship Wars. The theme was "Hangover."

Title: Gaila Always Knows
Rating: PG for sexytimes

Comments

[diane_kepler]

Uhura/Galia: Sweet and hot and there needs to be moar. Galia should make a little nest on the bed and stroke Uhura's hair to relax her while she tells the story and then it must lead to sexytimes. *nodsnods*

Diplomacy: Two best parts: finding Pike on the floor and Sarek/Orion delegation. I would *love* to hear Sarek's muzzy, half-hearted excuses for why they shouldn't in this lovely green-on-green scenario.

O bb. Y, y do you tease me?

Also, the fact that ppl are RPing Sarek/Spock Prime is making my head spin. I frickin' heart this fandom so much.

[anodyna]

I love your idea of the little nest! I agree Uhura and Gaila need to spend more quality sexytimes together. Now you have me thinking thoughts about it--Nyota fresh from being ravished by Spock, getting re-ravished by Gaila in the dorm-room reenactment? With Spock's Vulcan pheromones still all over her? *shivers*

(I've actually already written a "Nyota arrives home after the first time" story [ The Virgin], although the result isn't so much hands-on sexytimes as "Gaila-assisted [verbal] reenactment of imaginary first-time dorm sex with virgin Baby Cadet Spock." But ITA that Nyota and Gaila have some kind of roommates-with-benefits arrangement that needs to be more thoroughly explored.)

I would *love* to hear Sarek's muzzy, half-hearted excusesOMG, me too!! It's slightly addictive writing little stories where I get to make throwaway references to off-screen Sarek/Orion delegation--I get to conjure up whatever my heart desires without actually taking the time to write the whole story! But I would love to, because really. As you

Dammit, Jim!

[mistaria]

::can't stop giggling over both sets:: Oh, Gaila. "Wait--did you just tell me something I don't know?" XD

And S/U + turbolifts. And Spock's dad + Orion delegates. ::sniggers:: I can so see a bunch of Orion's all eyeing each other like, "Now's our chance to check Vulcans off the list of species shagged!"

Edit: Crap, sorry. I keep accidentally hitting reply under peoples posts. XD At least this was in response to you this time.

Edit again: OMFG PLZ 2 B WRITING GAILA/NYOTA SEXYTIMES ONCE NYOTA RETURNS HOME FROM SEXYTIMES WITH SPOCK!!! ::cheerleads!:: And Sarek/Orions! With muzzy excuses. Yes, yes, yes!

Re: Dammit, Jim!

[anodyna]

Hee, thanks! Also, OMG I know I need to write those Gaila/Nyota sexytimes and incapacitated Sarek/Orions! If only my imagination would settle down so I could write what I already have on the burner. Too many thoughts!

(I would give anything to know how people write such great stories so quickly! I feel like I write ten words for every six I need, then I spend 70% of my writing time trying to edit my sentences down to some kind of concision. Although I didn't with these ficlets since they had to be done in an hour--deadlines are good for my decisiveness, apparently. :) )

Also hee to the comment roulette--I've done that too, and then been like, whodidIjustreplytowhat? It's all good, though--everything finds its way back to the original poster eventually. :D

[mistaria]

::squeals over future fics!::

I totally feel you on people pumping out chapters and stories so quickly (and awesome ones at that!). There are a bunch of great S/U writers who do this and while I love it I definitely don't understand it since whenever I try to write I do the same... write... edit. Write... edit. And then with me I never finish. I think sometimes you just have to force yourself to write and stop worrying but this is definitely easier said than done.

In any case I am totally here to cheerlead you on! :D

[diane_kepler]

Eeeheehee, Sarek + D'Nila et al. No guarantee that I'll write it but I'll totally note it down. The fact that the girls would be doing this as "payback" for chewing Spock out in Renunciation is a brilliant, brilliant idea.

Also, I wave dildoes of encouragement for the Uhura/Galia sexytimes and Sarek/Orion delegates listed below.

[anodyna]

Speaking of Sarek and dildoes of encouragement, do you and proudcockatrice know I'm stalking your Sarek-Starek RP thread? I learned how to use "track this" and now I get the updates in my mailbox. It's kind of weird and stalkery that I can do that, actually, but OTOH it's so thrilling when I see there's something new!

(Okay, maybe dildoes of encouragement aren't quite the right thing for that particular RP. Unless you're planning some Orion-on-Vulcan action for Sarek, in which case DILDOES OF ENCOURAGEMENT X 1000!)

(PS I don't remember where I read the initial remarks that led you guys to this RP--the time period is before Starek and Spock meet, is that right?)

(PPS Did I mention I love it already?)

[diane_kepler]

You know -- I need to go figure the timeframe out! At this juncture I'm not sure if Starek and Spock have already met or not.

But stalk away, bb, stalk to your heart's content.