Just like my own story...
ok, so it actually is my own story, but I feel like I can relate to this one more. Well, not relate because I am nothing like the girl in it, but I feel like she lives in me, so I can always live her life when I want to, even when it means that I have to write it instead of be it.
Ok, so you ((actually, no one, cause no one ever reads this)) are wondering what I'm talking about. I'm writing a different book, and I think that I'm actually going to finisht this one. I like it a lot, because it's just like a bedtime story for me, it even begins with "Once upon a time" and I love that way too much. I don't kow what I'm going to name the girl, but I thik that I'll have to save that for the end. She has this name for the guy, she lives in a world full of cookie-cutter houses and cookie people, and she just stands out the most. when this guy sees her dancing nude on her roof in the moonlight, he starts to talk to her, and she calls him "Cookie" and she invivte him to dance with her. he never does, but still joins her on the roof everynight when her parenst are out. I don't know what's going to happen beyond that, but I still have a lot to write pertaining to that. I think I'll have her whisper her name to him at the end, as sort of a "I don't tell any cookies my name" deal, and she'll wait a moment and lean over and whisper it to him.
But I need a nickname for him to call her, something that means different. Think of it this way: if cooie means the same, than what means different?
I would really love it if someone could give me some feed back about this. Please?
Ok, so you ((actually, no one, cause no one ever reads this)) are wondering what I'm talking about. I'm writing a different book, and I think that I'm actually going to finisht this one. I like it a lot, because it's just like a bedtime story for me, it even begins with "Once upon a time" and I love that way too much. I don't kow what I'm going to name the girl, but I thik that I'll have to save that for the end. She has this name for the guy, she lives in a world full of cookie-cutter houses and cookie people, and she just stands out the most. when this guy sees her dancing nude on her roof in the moonlight, he starts to talk to her, and she calls him "Cookie" and she invivte him to dance with her. he never does, but still joins her on the roof everynight when her parenst are out. I don't know what's going to happen beyond that, but I still have a lot to write pertaining to that. I think I'll have her whisper her name to him at the end, as sort of a "I don't tell any cookies my name" deal, and she'll wait a moment and lean over and whisper it to him.
But I need a nickname for him to call her, something that means different. Think of it this way: if cooie means the same, than what means different?
I would really love it if someone could give me some feed back about this. Please?