halfway gone!

[anamuan]

I've passed 150k words this year, which is half of my yearly goal for getyourwordsout. Obviously this means I'm volunteering to write you commentfic.

Rules:♠I will write for: Inception, Merlin, J2, Generation Kill, JE, Gundam Wing, the odd Jdrama maybe. I mightmightmight be able to be bullied into writing for Hawaii 5-0

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[lezzerlee]

Ariadne/Eames size!kink
Eames love fucking Ariadne because she is so small. Not just because she's so tight and easy to throw around (that's a bonus) but because she's so skinny, and he can see himself move inside her with every thrust. He loves placing his hand on her stomach and feeling it too.

Ummmmm...yeah, like one of the only het things I want.

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[anamuan]

Ariadne loves how big Eames is, how he's over a good head taller than her when she tucks up under his chin. She loves how broad his shoulders are, how he looms over her when he leans over her on the bed, caging her in and blocking out the rest of the world. She loves the way he feels so big inside her--nearly too big, too full--and how that means he always has to go so slowly at first, stretching out with his fingers (already so big on their own, so much bigger than her own small hands) first, just to get her ready to take his cock.

He's patient with her because he gets off on it, likes to watch the way his fingers disappear into her, likes to watch the way her face relaxes as she gets wetter, as she gets used to the stretch of two of his big fingers, then three. Ariadne knows he likes the way he can get her moaning for him and impatient by the end, when three fingers slide in and out quickly; she knows that he likes the way she is when she's slick and wet and ready, but she still winces a little when it's finally his cock. She knows

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[anamuan]

Eames loves how tiny Ariadne is. He loves the way he can throw her around if he wants, loves the way he can just lift her up in his arms and toss her onto the bed, or the way he can haul her up and doesn't even need to pin her to a wall to fuck her standing up, because if she wraps her legs around his waist he can easily support them both.

He gets off on prepping her--loves that he has to, has to loosen her up with his fingers before he can even think about putting prick in her tight little cunt because otherwise even though she wants him, he won't fit. He likes the way he always, always has to start slow for her to open up for him, and the way she clamps down tightly once he's inside, like she wants to keep him in her forever. He loves that he can see where the head of his prick rests inside her, the way it presses up against the soft flesh of her stomach from the inside, that she's so full of him there isn't any more room, that she literally has to stretch to take him. Eames loves that he can see where he is inside her, not just

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[neomeruru]

Hnngh, oh my god. Both of these were just fucking delicious, in a way that het porn almost never is for me. I love the description of him pressing down, especially from Ariadne's POV -- actually, I love everything from Ariadne's POV. Just, everything.

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[anamuan]

i almost never write het, and it seemed like such a good opportunity to get ariadne POV so i wrote it twice XD

incidentally, why do you think het porn is so seldom hot for you? I almost never read it--i'll almost avoid it--but I'm not entirely sure why I don't enjoy it

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[neomeruru]

I was thinking that myself as I was writing the comment, trying to suss out exactly why I don't. I've rarely been wowed, stunned, turned on or otherwise by het fic -- there might be any number of reasons, here's a few I thought of and they may or may not apply to either me or you, or they might apply to varying degrees, just ideas

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[anamuan]

hmmmm i'll have to think about these sometime when I'm not supposed to be sleeping. I can see how a lot of these could come into play. just to clarify, how do you mean 'uncomfortable to have a female POV'?

see, i do read femmeslash (and write it), and often enjoy it quite a bit--though what I like still tends towards the rough-and-tumble sex and away from sex that could be called 'lovemaking'.

I think I feel about het fic like I feel about certain pairings that I used to read and almost consistently found boring--eventually, I just don't want to read it because so many past experiences have disappointed. but i couldn't tell you why i so often find het boring.

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[neomeruru]

Oh, by that I mean, one of the common explanations for 'why do women like gay porn so much?!' is that they feel safer and less objectified if there are no women present. And then there's also being uncomfortable exploring new sexual kinks (or even just porn itself) through a woman's eyes, which might be overwhelming for the reader whereas there's more of a disconnect if it's through a man's eyes.

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[eternalsojourn]

wonders dazedly if he can bruise her from the inside as he comes

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[anamuan]

<3333 best kind of comment.

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[lezzerlee]

jalksjdflkasdjflakjsdfj!!!1 This is better than I imagined! I love it from both points of view! I just can't even. God, I rarely read het in this fandom so IDEK why this prompt seized my mind. I'm so thrilled that you filled it!

It's wonderful!

Just. Yes. Hnnng!

Re: Ariadne/Eames size!kink (2)

[anamuan]

it just seemed like such a good opportunity to write ariadne pov, but the prompt was kind of eames pov-y...so i wrote both. XD

I'd probably never write het in this fandom if it weren't for prompts like this, so I'm so glad you left it--it's fun to get to play around a little bit. so thank you for the opportunity, and i'm so glad you liked the result!

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[krytella]

WOW that was delicious. Great to see someone taking advantage of the het-ness, if that makes any sense (the physical position of the vagina and all).

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[anamuan]

taking advantage of the het-ness, if that makes any sense (the physical position of the vagina and all).
i am actually not entirely sure I understand--probably because i'm so tired right now, but could you run it by me again?

but thank you so much! it is one of my personal goals in life to wow you with porn, actually.

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[krytella]

Re: "het-ness," I was thinking of some discussions I'd had with people about deep penetration as a kink in slash, and the idea of feeling from the outside. Because the vagina is closer to the front of the body, it's easier to feel vaginal penetration than anal penetration from outside. Basically, I find this more anatomically plausible than if it had been written with a m/m pairing and anal penetration. Am I making any sense?

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[anamuan]

oh, oh oh! i see what you mean!