halfway gone!
I've passed 150k words this year, which is half of my yearly goal for getyourwordsout. Obviously this means I'm volunteering to write you commentfic.
Rules:♠I will write for: Inception, Merlin, J2, Generation Kill, JE, Gundam Wing, the odd Jdrama maybe. I mightmightmight be able to be bullied into writing for Hawaii 5-0 ( Read more... )
Rules:♠I will write for: Inception, Merlin, J2, Generation Kill, JE, Gundam Wing, the odd Jdrama maybe. I mightmightmight be able to be bullied into writing for Hawaii 5-0 ( Read more... )
He gets off on prepping her--loves that he has to, has to loosen her up with his fingers before he can even think about putting prick in her tight little cunt because otherwise even though she wants him, he won't fit. He likes the way he always, always has to start slow for her to open up for him, and the way she clamps down tightly once he's inside, like she wants to keep him in her forever. He loves that he can see where the head of his prick rests inside her, the way it presses up against the soft flesh of her stomach from the inside, that she's so full of him there isn't any more room, that she literally has to stretch to take him. Eames loves that he can see where he is inside her, not just where he enters, but all the way in; he loves that he can put his hand there, on the downward slope of her belly and he can feel it, can feel the shape of him moving inside her.
He presses his palm there when they have sex. She always goes crazy when he does that. He asked her once, and she says it feels good, all the pressure, like he's trying to fuck right through her. Eames snaps his hips deeper into her, palm resting heavy on her stomach, feeling like he's finally got something substantial to push against, thrusting up and up and up and in and in and in until she clenches down around him with her orgasm, so tight he thinks he might die from it, that this tiny woman will kill him like this.
He presses down more firmly on the soft skin between her hips, on his own prick deep inside her, and wonders dazedly if he can bruise her from the inside as he comes.
He can't pull out right away, because Ariadne keeps rocking her hips desperately forward as he starts to slide out, desperately reclaiming all the millimeters of him she'd lost. Eventually she's relaxed enough for him to pull out, so he does, careful of the condom. He presses a kiss to her stomach as he ties the condom off, and Ariadne gasps and shakes all over--and suddenly Eames wants to do it all over again, wants to fuck her with his fingers until she's begging for something bigger, something that will fill her up like he does. Then he'll fuck her with a toy, mouthing along all the soft curves of her stomach until she comes again.
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incidentally, why do you think het porn is so seldom hot for you? I almost never read it--i'll almost avoid it--but I'm not entirely sure why I don't enjoy it
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- uncomfortable to have a female POV
- uncomfortable with female pleasure in general
- bored/uninterested by descriptions of female pleasure
- unwillingness to identify with the characters
- uncomfortable to read porn with women in it (objectification worries)
- no need to read about it, I can go experience it
- lack of good fic/good writers of het
- tendency for kinky fic to "read" like a porno, not an exporation of character
- writers who write het porn are able to rely on a pantheon of mainstream phrases and plots to describe female pleasure; slash feels more novel
- lack of adequate, sexy words in English to describe women's bodies
- in my experience, less rough-and-tumble sex/tendency to more loving, vanilla sex
- writer tendency to gloss over what it really feels like in favour of flowery, obtuse, cliche, or terse language
Interestingly enough, I don't read femmeslash either. I like cocks, I like reading about cocks. I'm really simple that way.
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see, i do read femmeslash (and write it), and often enjoy it quite a bit--though what I like still tends towards the rough-and-tumble sex and away from sex that could be called 'lovemaking'.
I think I feel about het fic like I feel about certain pairings that I used to read and almost consistently found boring--eventually, I just don't want to read it because so many past experiences have disappointed. but i couldn't tell you why i so often find het boring.
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Buh
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It's wonderful!
Just. Yes. Hnnng!
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I'd probably never write het in this fandom if it weren't for prompts like this, so I'm so glad you left it--it's fun to get to play around a little bit. so thank you for the opportunity, and i'm so glad you liked the result!
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i am actually not entirely sure I understand--probably because i'm so tired right now, but could you run it by me again?
but thank you so much! it is one of my personal goals in life to wow you with porn, actually.
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<333
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