"Green: Lust" - the Beginnings
Yugioh some work I've done on the next Sevenfold bit
Anzu
Everyone was going.
It was new, relatively unknown - a haven for young, restless creatures who wanted to drown in a dizzy, electric sea. The cover charge was low and the dress code was novel; pay to get in, drink for free, wear a mask all night.
Poison - Domino’s hottest underground spot.
Anzu followed her two friends inside, shoving her money down and avoiding the pull of the endless sea of bodies stretched across the floor. The paint on the walls was peeling; all the lights seemed neon, bright and earnestly illuminating what small space they could. All she could see was green; everyone wore black and bright, acid green - the color spun around and around as people walked and danced and ran, a sort of hysteric new rainbow of only one stunningly bright hue.
Lights flashed. A woman in a short skirt carried a tray of shots over towards them. Both girls Anzu was with took one of the tubes and poured it down the respective throat. Anzu pulled at the string of her mask, straightening it against her hair.
There were so many people. She wasn’t shy but she was uncomfortable, jostled about and packed so tightly she could barely breathe. Through the smiles and laughter and wild, raucous obliviousness she made her way to the dance floor.
Music was playing; but it wasn’t really music, it was rhythmic noise, crisp and bubbling and with a beat one could feel from her fingertips to her toes. Anzu closed her eyes.
She felt it all through her body - the pulsing, pumping beat.
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And that's it! I'm not entirely happy with it so far. But I think you can see where it's going. Oh yeah. ^_^ (<- That's me; I beam.) It's pretty much just what my notes said in the previous entry. I still have some more to plan, and I really need to work on my description. For some reason, it feels kinda surreal. I mean... not to me, exactly, but it seems like it would feel surreal to other people. (I dunno - it's why my friends say my poetry is weird. *shrugs*) I'll keep working!
"ICOE" chapter 23 should be coming back from my beta soon. I kinda gave her a lot... >.< OH! But I suppose I can start work on chapter 24! Yeah; ideas! Ha ha. Anyway... that's all for now! I should be back with something else soon.
-ILB
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Anzu
Everyone was going.
It was new, relatively unknown - a haven for young, restless creatures who wanted to drown in a dizzy, electric sea. The cover charge was low and the dress code was novel; pay to get in, drink for free, wear a mask all night.
Poison - Domino’s hottest underground spot.
Anzu followed her two friends inside, shoving her money down and avoiding the pull of the endless sea of bodies stretched across the floor. The paint on the walls was peeling; all the lights seemed neon, bright and earnestly illuminating what small space they could. All she could see was green; everyone wore black and bright, acid green - the color spun around and around as people walked and danced and ran, a sort of hysteric new rainbow of only one stunningly bright hue.
Lights flashed. A woman in a short skirt carried a tray of shots over towards them. Both girls Anzu was with took one of the tubes and poured it down the respective throat. Anzu pulled at the string of her mask, straightening it against her hair.
There were so many people. She wasn’t shy but she was uncomfortable, jostled about and packed so tightly she could barely breathe. Through the smiles and laughter and wild, raucous obliviousness she made her way to the dance floor.
Music was playing; but it wasn’t really music, it was rhythmic noise, crisp and bubbling and with a beat one could feel from her fingertips to her toes. Anzu closed her eyes.
She felt it all through her body - the pulsing, pumping beat.
***
And that's it! I'm not entirely happy with it so far. But I think you can see where it's going. Oh yeah. ^_^ (<- That's me; I beam.) It's pretty much just what my notes said in the previous entry. I still have some more to plan, and I really need to work on my description. For some reason, it feels kinda surreal. I mean... not to me, exactly, but it seems like it would feel surreal to other people. (I dunno - it's why my friends say my poetry is weird. *shrugs*) I'll keep working!
"ICOE" chapter 23 should be coming back from my beta soon. I kinda gave her a lot... >.< OH! But I suppose I can start work on chapter 24! Yeah; ideas! Ha ha. Anyway... that's all for now! I should be back with something else soon.
-ILB
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