"Illusions of Safety" in its revised form, has been posted to fanfiction.net. I'm trying to get hold of the
virtual S7 folks to get them to upload the revised version to that site as well.
17,000 words, and I'm quite proud of it.
PG (for violence and language)
The story has a hostage situation inside a car dealership with threats, gunplay, and violence. Amanda orchestrates the action from the inside, Lee from the outside. Also, I love Dotty.
I have finished the first story I've ever written where I had to write a real plot, develop it, maintain it, resolve it, and most of the plot is courtesy of the wonderful brainstorming help of
mtgat and
Yahtzee63. And, tonight, with hours of help from
ayiana2, I finished my final revision on it. Other wonderful beta work from
besyd,
timberwolf62792,
dotfic, and Jennifer C. Consults from Husband.
*beam*
*bounce*