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jenbunny December 9 2009, 07:50:39 UTC
Very very nice ^^

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alizep December 10 2009, 16:30:54 UTC
Thank you!

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venusorbit1 December 9 2009, 09:07:07 UTC
Horny Venus is the best Venus, and you do Horny Venus incredibly well! the way you describe the male form is fucking cool as shit, too. I wish I had a tenth of your ability at description.

And the closing lines was like, "Yep. I can never touch this!"

NOW WRITE MORE FLOV! Or more snippets. WTF just write!!!

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alizep December 10 2009, 16:32:16 UTC
I have another version of this snippet that I'm planning to write. Technically I have a third version too...but I have to get the other one written first. :)

And there will be plenty more descriptions of the male form to come!

FLOV hates me....

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sugarcross December 9 2009, 11:31:45 UTC
^%#*&!!!

How did you manage to do HAWT in so short a drabble? Teach me, Alize!

Needless to say I loved it. The last paragraph in particular had my jaw dropped to my feet. Oh dear I'm already incoherent after a long day at work, and now you've shotgunned my brain.

Seconding V: MOAR FLOV PLZZZZ!

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alizep December 10 2009, 16:37:13 UTC
How did you manage to do HAWT in so short a drabble?
I was just so proud of myself for keeping it short. :)

I'm glad you loved it. I really enjoyed writing that last line. I'm sure it got quite the response out of Kunzite - but that's what makes this couple so fun to write, they are always surprising each other.

I'm trying to write more FLOV....

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charliechaplin2 December 9 2009, 13:09:01 UTC
Oh hell yes! That's effing hot. What a last line.I love it when Venus is being a dirty, horny Senshi. She's just as susceptible to her element as everyone else. That was a line she delivered. And he is HOT.

Damn girl.

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alizep December 10 2009, 16:40:19 UTC
The heat coming off these two is always pretty intense. You can't blame the guy for being drawn to her when she spouts out lines like that.

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xxdesert_rose December 10 2009, 00:12:39 UTC
Only Venus can get away with being that dirty minded!

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alizep December 10 2009, 16:40:45 UTC
Hey - you owe me a fic!

But yes - the girl likes to try to make him blush.

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