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[albion1919]

Title: Bachata

Characters: Sylar/Maya

Rating: R (swears)

Word count: 1, 974

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: He finds her in a bar.

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[gimmemypickle]

*pushes Cana out of the way* FIRST! ;-x Ahem.

This was so hot and naughty. And yay for Possessive!Sylar! And ROFL @ "fucking cockblocker." His mother would wash out his mouth with soap for that one. ;-)

[razycrandomgirl]

YOU BITCH! *smacks ... runs away!*

[lacrymosa_star]

LMFAO!! I love u, Cana!! You make me laugh randomly!!

[razycrandomgirl]

that's my job! Are you feeling better missy? *cuddles*

[razycrandomgirl]

A fat eerie sun, deep orange against the sky, sits above swollen sangria storm clouds ...

I love it! I can almost taste that sunset ...

“Well I’m gonna look to and I don’t give a shit if you end up stranded here because I’m going to find her first.”

LOL they are so petty!

“Found you.” guh!

And it suddenly feels like he’s filed with currant, an engorged sparking crackle that runs through him and over him, burning lava thick. His eyes are flames in the dark.

phew ... green-eyed monster.

He moves a hand down to his jeans, the front of them beginning to stretch tight with a growing erection. His mind and face flush with an old buried feeling and he swallows finally, convulsively. He wants to turn away from her but her eyes finally lock onto his. They widen, shocked before they dart over his face, down, down and then quickly up. And she’s got a new face, half lidded with a smoky drunk gaze. She sucks in her bottom lip slowly and then it protrudes again, shiny and wet. ... dude! *is deb

[albion1919]

He's just bitter because Ale wanted to do that to him, lol.

Thank you!! I know I said I was going to take my time with it but I felt it was finished lol.

We totally should! The car scene with UST coming next :)

[razycrandomgirl]

I love missing scenes! \o/

[albion1919]

Me to!!! :D

[lacrymosa_star]

I really liked it actually!! You know im not by on Saya, but it was great!!

♥

[albion1919]

Thank you! That means alot as you don't like the ship ^_^

(was the Spanish alright? I used babelfish :x)

[lacrymosa_star]

^_^ I love all ur fics, sweetie!

Si, estaba muy bien!!!

[albion1919]

Ohh thank you!!! ♥

Gracias! ;)

[fifmeister]

*fans self* I feel like I just melted! This was awesome. I loved Sylar and Alejandro bickering at each other at the beginning--so true to their characters, hehe! Poor over-protective Alejandro.

“Well I’m gonna look to and I don’t give a shit if you end up stranded here because I’m going to find her first.”

That part made me crack up!

They had spent days doing nothing but talk and sing together. She loved to sing and wasn’t bad and he found himself enjoying it.

I loved the thought of that! I can just visualize the two of them sitting in the front of the car, singing a duet together while Alejandro's head explodes in the back seat. *grin* And for some reason, I totally think Sylar is a good singer. I don't know why, it's just part of my personal AU. Maybe it's because I know ZQ has a background in musical theater. :p

I watched the YouTube video, and holy crap, if Maya was doing that to some other dude, no wonder Sylar got all possessive! *shivers* That was just plain hot. Can't wait to see what comes next!

[albion1919]

Thank you!! I can see them doing it to, maybe when Maya isn't in earshot lol.

:D

As I was writing that bit I suddenly had a crack/fluffy thought that he sings her silly songs in the car when she'd feeling down. And of course Ale has no idea what he's saying, lol. It's my personal AU that he can sing, ZQ can so I'm using that talent!

I wanted to find some dances and saw that the merengue is popular and the bachata. omg I was shocked when I saw it, lol.

UST comes next, I hope :)

[razycrandomgirl]

UST comes next, I hope :)

are you kidding me. this wasn't UST ...?

I love when he says "Found you." like they were playing hid and go seek or something. Very cat & mouse.

[albion1919]

Well I guess there's tension but to me it's when they're together it will crank up :x

*nods* Totally. I love that (I'm going to do that with my Maya revenge fic)

[dream_infinity0]

very nice, I love how you wrote him all jealous.

great work

can't wait to see what you come up with next

[albion1919]

Thank you!!! :D