Requested by azriona in this post, the commentary for Threshold, Chapter 3. (Yes, I'm planning to do chapter 4; they're all one story, after all.) :)

( For Auld Lang Syne pt. 1 commentary )

Remember the commentary meme? Where you pick one of my stories (or one chapter of a chaptered fic) and I do a DVD-extra commentary sort of thing on it? Requests are open! Pick anything you like, and I'll post commentaries.

For a list of those that have already been done, check out my commentary tag.

Any takers? :)

Fulfilling galadriella1's request on this meme, here's the commentary from Adventure chapter 4: the reunion!

ETA: There's nothing wrong with my coding, but for some reason, both Firefox and IE are putting in an extra backslash at the end of the URL if you click on the link above. I don't understand why, but if you just delete the extra backslash--or the ( Read more... )

debs7 asked for commentary on my short story "Melancholy," so here it is, just for her!

( Melancholy, with commentary. )

( Teach Me More commentary, part 2 )

Part 3 of glory_jean's request for commentary on the Language Lessons series.

( Teach Me More, part 1. )

Again, commentary from my fic commentary meme. glory_jean wanted commentary on the Language Lessons series, so here's part 2: Precious.

( Precious )

Another commentary from my fic commentary meme. glory_jean asked for commentary for as much of the Language Lessons series as I was willing to give. Since I don't have a whole lot to do today (or, well, I do, but I don't feel like doing it--who wants to do laundry on Labor Day?), I think I'll do the whole thing, just because I'm, you know, nice. *g ( Read more... )

Part 2 of the Commentary meme. This one as requested by larielromeniel, asking for commentary on Children's Crusade, chapter 5.

(And this meme seems to have done its trick--now I want to go write more on that! Unfortunately, once I'm done posting this, I have to go to bed. Sob.)

( Commentary on Children's Crusade ch 5 )

Ok, I had two people so far respond to my DVD extras meme, where you pick a short fic, or a chapter of a long fic, and I do a sort of "commentary" to it. garpu chose A Long Way Home, a short, angsty Jack-fic written near the end of series 1 of Torchwood.

Many thanks to earlgreytea68, whose own commentary helped me figure out how to format this! Also, if you still ( Read more... )