[FIC] The Lone Samurai ~ Prologue
Title: THE LONE SAMURAI ~Prologue~
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji, Yuuta, Mention of Yumiko and Fuji's father.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2.729
Warning(s): Lots of angst. Character’s death(s). Little bits of tragedy and violence in the prologue, but it shouldn’t be too traumatizing as I tried to keep them at minimum. But in the original tale, it has ( Read more... )
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji, Yuuta, Mention of Yumiko and Fuji's father.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2.729
Warning(s): Lots of angst. Character’s death(s). Little bits of tragedy and violence in the prologue, but it shouldn’t be too traumatizing as I tried to keep them at minimum. But in the original tale, it has ( Read more... )
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Here to steal 1st comment again, XD
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only Sei-chan guessed it was me or Vier (coz of the OshiAto-ness) and acantabloom who guessed everyone right ^^
XD yay for first comment XD
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this prologue is so nicely written. I'd love to read more about what's gonna happen to Tezuka and Fuji ^^
The scene when Fuji's father and Yuuta died is so sad... for no reason, I like the scene when Fuji and Tezuka slashed around wildly.... it seems so emotional ^^
I think you make a mistake here, However, Yuusaku’s incessant, albeit unintentional, comparisons of Yuuta and his Syuusuke and sometimes, Yuuta and Kunimitsu had an effect on Yuuta
and Tezuka's name in this line ^^ Barely shouting the lithe boy’s name, Kunimtsu could hear the sound of a sword stabbing a limb, and blood sputtered outI like the fact that they are to be rely on each other... I wonder if one of them has a downfall or something, how the other would survive consider how much they have been through ( ... )
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Even when I've reread t for the nth time, I still missed typos O__O
Thanks for pointing out, will fix it later ^^
and thank you! I'm glad you liked this prologue <3
As for downfall or who'll die.... eheheh, just read the next part when I posted it XDDD
*hugs Tammy*
Thanks for reading and commenting <3
(Soooujiiiiiii~!!)
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If I had not read the whole fic first, and you posted just that a warning of angst, I'll die of waiting! *will think who's gonna die*
And I am not good at guessing but because of OshiAto hint, I thought you or Vier-san wrote this one! ^_^
My fave in perfect_tales and I'm not biased because I actually read all the fics first before I learned the author of this! *probably because of Souji and Hijikata Shinsengumi. and the my fave scene which is not yet in this post! ^_^
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a good thing that you've read the whole fic then, ne? XD
And just because the OshiAto, you got me? XD;;
Aawww~ thanks so much! I'm glad that this fic is your fave <3
Do tell me your fave scene when it's posted ne? :D
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Wheee~ detailed review <3 *glomps Isumi*
I'm really glad you enjoyed this fic, and also glad you like the descriptions!
I thought it was too plain and straight-forward, but if that what makes the fic "alive", then I am happy <3
much thanks for reading and reviewing! part berikutnya next weekend, heheh XD
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This is so sad! I wouldn't be able to live if my family got killed (in front of my eyes). But Tezuka lives and he gets a new family and than he new family gets killed too. I would have killed myself, but Tezuka is so strong that he doesn't and even prevents Syuu from killing him himself.
The best part is the part where Yuuta is dying. Not that I like that he dies, but his ‘I don’t… want to… die… yet…’ made me cry. So beautiful!
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I think Tezuka is strong (and he has Fuji XD) so he kept on living ^^
and of course he can't let Fuji dies now, could he? eheheh... tho you know what'll happen next XD;;
Aww... *gives tissue*
glad you cry though *bricked*
XD
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I wish I was as strong as Tezuka! Losing two families, but still living on. It shows how much he likes Fuji.
Thanks XD Well, you know how much I loved this fic, you know why I cried
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