[FIC] The Lone Samurai ~ Prologue

[a1y_puff]

Title: THE LONE SAMURAI ~Prologue~
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji, Yuuta, Mention of Yumiko and Fuji's father.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2.729
Warning(s): Lots of angst. Character’s death(s). Little bits of tragedy and violence in the prologue, but it shouldn’t be too traumatizing as I tried to keep them at minimum. But in the original tale, it has

Comments

[milkyxduckie]

woa... this is angsty....
this prologue is so nicely written. I'd love to read more about what's gonna happen to Tezuka and Fuji ^^
The scene when Fuji's father and Yuuta died is so sad... for no reason, I like the scene when Fuji and Tezuka slashed around wildly.... it seems so emotional ^^

I think you make a mistake here, However, Yuusaku’s incessant, albeit unintentional, comparisons of Yuuta and his Syuusuke and sometimes, Yuuta and Kunimitsu had an effect on Yuuta
and Tezuka's name in this line ^^ Barely shouting the lithe boy’s name, Kunimtsu could hear the sound of a sword stabbing a limb, and blood sputtered out

I like the fact that they are to be rely on each other... I wonder if one of them has a downfall or something, how the other would survive consider how much they have been through...

omg. pls don't tell me that you're going to kill one of them...

lol I like waiting so I think I'll wait for each chapter you posted :P so I can have a chance to comment on each of them ^^

*hugs Ai*

(I set the Souji avatar because this fic makes me want to watch PMK again so much!!!! xD)

[a1y_puff]

....
Even when I've reread t for the nth time, I still missed typos O__O
Thanks for pointing out, will fix it later ^^

and thank you! I'm glad you liked this prologue <3
As for downfall or who'll die.... eheheh, just read the next part when I posted it XDDD

*hugs Tammy*
Thanks for reading and commenting <3

(Soooujiiiiiii~!!)