[FIC] The Lone Samurai ~ Prologue

[a1y_puff]

Title: THE LONE SAMURAI ~Prologue~
Characters: Tezuka, Fuji, Yuuta, Mention of Yumiko and Fuji's father.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2.729
Warning(s): Lots of angst. Character’s death(s). Little bits of tragedy and violence in the prologue, but it shouldn’t be too traumatizing as I tried to keep them at minimum. But in the original tale, it has

Comments

[isumi_ilde]

*points* Neesan, you. are. evil. YOu killed Yuuta!!! But that's the best part, though... *lho?*

The angst is just sooo thick... and I like how you describe the weight Tezuka felt for not being able to protect those important to him, yet gave him a spirit, a will to keep moving forward so he wouldn't lose what's left to him. The tension, from the very beginning, was AWESOME.

I really loved how you highlighted the fact of: "you're all i have left." It gives an atmosphere of the only hope there is and both boys trying to cling on it with all their might. I could feel the desperation.. how both of them really needed each other and just wouldn't know what to do except to live for the other. Bener2 soulmate!!!

Isumi suka perbandingan warna daun2 maple dengan darah!! Beautifully written, dan memang cocok banget!! It adds to the angst, making the whole thing more heartwrenching. And I like that kind of description you used in this fic. very... to the point, straight! Sugoi! Penggunaan deskripsi yg langsung dan tanpa basa-basi bikin semuanya jadi terasa lebih real dan.. i don't know.. seperti menekankan betapa beratnya beban Tezuka dan Fuji yg ditinggal keluarga mereka dan hanya punya satu sama lain? So sweet, yet so sad... TT-TT

Part berikutnya kapan? XD

[a1y_puff]

*hides* no I am not D: *runs*

Wheee~ detailed review <3 *glomps Isumi*
I'm really glad you enjoyed this fic, and also glad you like the descriptions!
I thought it was too plain and straight-forward, but if that what makes the fic "alive", then I am happy <3

much thanks for reading and reviewing! part berikutnya next weekend, heheh XD