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Title: It Just Doesn’t Fit
Pairings/Characters: Brendan Morrison/Taylor Pyatt
Word Count: 3679
Rating: PG-13ish
Setting: Vancouver, B.C., maybe at the beginning of this upcoming season?
Disclaimer: I don’t own these players, nor do I know their sexual preferences. The whole thing is a work of my imagination, my sick and twisted imagination ;) Also ( Read more... )
Pairings/Characters: Brendan Morrison/Taylor Pyatt
Word Count: 3679
Rating: PG-13ish
Setting: Vancouver, B.C., maybe at the beginning of this upcoming season?
Disclaimer: I don’t own these players, nor do I know their sexual preferences. The whole thing is a work of my imagination, my sick and twisted imagination ;) Also ( Read more... )
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Just a thing about Mo's kids - you said that they would all be in school at one point in your fic. Maybe two out of the three, but their youngest child isn't even two years old yet, so I don't think that'd happen. Daycare maybe ;)
And this may be just me, but I have a hard time believing that Mo is unhappy in his relationship with Erin mostly because every time I read him talking about his family, he's always praising her and how wonderful and supportive she is, and just all the little things they do together. They come across as a really stable couple, so for me, I just don't see him wanting to get divorced or anything. i mean of course we don't know what goes on for sure, so I'm just basing a lot of this on interviews I've watched and read ( ... )
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1) I couldn't find much on his kids, so I was somewhat guessing at their ages. I knew that one of his daughters was quite young, just wasn't sure how young. I'll fix that.
2) I'm not suggesting he isn't happy at home, in fact he seems to have one of the more stable relationships. I was simply doing this for the purpose of my fic. I'm sure he and his wife are very happy. I just felt like writing that they weren't so that I could work in Taylor. It's fiction yeah?
3) I wasn't describing Taylor, I was describing the guy that was hitting on them. I'm sorry if that was unclear.
But thank you for the comment, I'll fix it up some. And I agree, I think they're quite hot, thus the pairing.
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okay, i wasn't quite sure. i wasn't trying to take away from the fic or anything. and you're right it is just fiction :)
oh, gotcha. makes more sense now, thanks for clarifying.
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It's good to know when you've made mistakes sometimes. Humbling.
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I really liked this alot, which is surprising since Taylor and Brendan are on completely opposite ends of my love/hate spectrum! =) Good work as usual!
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Aw man, am I that predictable with my whole making one of them insecure/jealous thing? lol I gotta try and write a happy, stable fic once and awhile. :P
:O How can you hate either of them *smishes Brendan and Taylor* I loves them! (clearly teehee)
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I'd HAPPILY *smish* Taylor, Brendan not so much. I just have a problem with people who have temper tantrums and dont want to play for my team. Maybe that is just me tho LOL
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:D I LOVE Taylor Pyatt, and you're one of the few ppl I've ever seen put him in a fic (besides moi of course lol)
*huggles you* YAY...I kinda like Mo..he's cute :)
*runs away yelling* WOOOO TAYLOR...*goes to actually read fic now*
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My beta and I have that argument endlessly...she wants Taylor with Ryan, I want Danny with Ryan >.<..but you offered me a ready made solution! So, I was thinking Luongo, but I think Mo and Tay are a better idea :)
Great story, darling!
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And I'm glad to be of service, any time you need some inspiration. It really is the best solution I think. They're just so perty. ;)
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Yes, they rather are, aren't they? Aww ty...I'll come to you next time I need some too, k?
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