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Temporary Reprieve (D.N.Angel, Satoshi/Daisuke, Challenge #10)

Sep 16, 2005 00:14

Title: Temporary Reprieve
Author: ZukirinPairing: Satoshi x Daisuke ( Read more... )

Comments 16

vollykins September 16 2005, 05:18:34 UTC

friggin' adorable. x'333333 takeshi, you perv...

riku's really cool. :DD i like the way she's willing to stick up for daisuke and satoshi. heh. you go, gal. ;]

zukirin September 16 2005, 14:01:52 UTC

Aww... Thank you. :D

XD Did anyone notice who Takeshi was paired up with?

:D Riku's one of my favorite characters. So I really dislike it when she's bashed to make room for Satoshi and Daisuke's relationship in fanfiction.

smilbe September 16 2005, 10:18:05 UTC

This is soooo cute. I love how Satoshi's composed yet so daring. <3

zukirin September 16 2005, 14:03:31 UTC

XD Thanks!

Lol, somehow I imagine Satoshi that way. Like... Batman. >.>''' Maybe not.

:D Thank you for reading!

surasha September 16 2005, 15:42:49 UTC

*o* I love fluff. I love fluff very much. And this one just made my day...er, night...anyhoo, I like it very much! ^w^
Your fic on a scale of one to ten, how bout 25? 8D

zukirin September 16 2005, 22:54:07 UTC

:D *beams* Thank you for liking it!

Fluff makes the world go round. :)

25? *flattered beyond belief*

icexfire September 18 2005, 03:51:36 UTC

Ohhhh my god. Love! Loved it! That was awesome. Especially that last line. *will be squeeing for quite some time now* ^___^

zukirin September 18 2005, 04:47:09 UTC

xD Haha, lol, thank you! :D

Wahahaha... That line was cliche. I think. >.>''

:) I sometimes wish that other people wrote my stuff so that I could see it from another's point of view. My point of view makes my stuff seem drab...

Oh well.

:D Thank you again!

icexfire September 18 2005, 04:53:38 UTC

Lol well it might've been a little cliched, but either way, cliches work when they're well timed and not used too often. That's what I think, anyway, cause that totally worked ^.^

les_scribbles September 18 2005, 22:40:36 UTC

Revise it if you will, but O how I heart Takeshi there. (And he's dating Risa?) He's such an irksome reporter, it's cute. Satoshi and Daisuke were lovely, of course, but Takeshi was a rare treat, and I especially liked how there was 'not a trace of guilt' in his voice.

zukirin September 19 2005, 02:19:09 UTC

Lol, thank you very much~! :D

:D It was kind of hard for me to imagine a working relationship between Takeshi and Riku, so I stuck him with Risa. *sweatdrop* But I think they'd make a compatible couple.

:) Takeshi puts Daisuke through so much stress and trauma in the manga... xD I just increased the extremity of his behavior by a notch. Or two. >.> Or maybe I could have decreased it. Takeshi's insane. :D Which is why we all love him.