Fourteen Seconds (1/1) (PG-13)

[zubeneschamali]

Title: Fourteen Seconds
Author: zuben_eschamali 
Rating: PG-13 (language, violence)
Word count: 4,125
Genre: gen
Summary: Post-ep maybe-AU for 6.16, "...And Then There Were None". Sam and Dean discover a few days after leaving Sandusky that all of the traces of the "khan worm" aren't completely gone.

Comments

[harrigan]

I ♥ all the different ways this show inspires us to hurt the boys! This rocked!

[zubeneschamali]

LOL, exactly! Thank you so much.

[whitereflection]

Oh nice, that really clicks into place at the end of that episode so very well. Excellent coda to it. (And Dean's 'too soon's will never fail to amuse me ^^ )

Congrats on all your recent writing accomplishments! Way impressive how much you've gotten done, when you've got such a busy life as well.

[zubeneschamali]

Thank you! I started it right after the ep but didn't get a chance to finish it until now. Things have certainly been busy...

[morganoconner]

Oh, my heart. Poor boys!! *wibble* Loved the banter at the end. ^_^

♥

[zubeneschamali]

*hugs* Banter always makes it better. :)

[jackfan2]

Oh, this was painfully perfect! The brotherly dynamic was well represented here with great dialogue and characterization.

Well! Done!!

[zubeneschamali]

Thank you! :)

[adrenalineshots]

That was a great idea, to have such a nasty consequence from the bug-thingies. And one hell of a good story that you've put together!

Loved it for all the little details that made me smile, that made me squirm in my seat and made me go all gooey for the Winchesters.

Thank you!

[zubeneschamali]

Thank you! I had fun with the details, so thanks for noticing them. :)