[fic practice] Wishing on a Purple Box [Nevermind, it's a Three-Shot now]

[zorata]

Title: Wishing on a Purple Box
Length: Two Shot (2/2) Never mind, it's a three-shot now >_<
Genre: Hopefully the outcome will be romance (plus a bit of angst)
Pairing: YunJae
Beware: of exaggerated and detail narration.
Warning: may implode your eyeballs. 8D
Summary: Jaejoong got a mysterious purple box for his birthday, and Yunho came out of it.

Comments

[kattan69]

This is good..really like your story line. Could we have more, pls?

[zorata]

Thank you! I'm happy that you liked it =D More will be coming after my brain recovers from this TT_TT

[zoolooney]

WAIII~!! >^__^<

First....I tend to read (almost) every word in the stories I read. I might skip a few filler words here and there ( it, and, the) but that's because I read so fast...>.<

And second....what can we do to make your brain become repaired faster so that you can continue? Because this is good~ and amusing and I can't wait to see a happily YunJae after!

And Jae...so precious. **Snicker** Cottonball pillow...wristband mattress....hey~ wonder if Yun moved those things (the wristbands at least) into his purple box? I mean...if he can't sleep with Jae, at least he can be surrounded by Jae-scent...and I'll shutup and wait for the next chapter now...

[zorata]

(love you avatar by the way XD Monty Python ftw!)

I think you are the only one so far who read every word (since you are the only one who responded to my question...hahaha~

My brain is better now after a good night's sleep. I'm glad it was amusing for you! =D How did you guess it's a happy ending? I was about to make a sad one, but decided against it since I don't think I can take an overload of romance and angst at the same time.

if he can't sleep with Jae, at least he can be surrounded by Jae-scent

Haha~ I never thought of that! (exactly why I can't write romance...not cheesy enough >_< ) I think I'll add that in somehow...

Thank you for reading! And for the mega comment XD

[zoolooney]

((Fweeee~~! Monty Python = twisted fun!))

We-he-he-he~ I'm so proud of myself. ^___^ And I'm sure so were my english teachers...

Yays for brain betterment! And I haz sekrit sikick powahs~, sos I sees teh FUCHURAHZ! XD

Wait....you was going to make it a sad ending?! @.@ I'm glad you decided against it in the end...

Lols. I can be Queen of Cheese Soup sometimes. At least, that's what my fanficfriends say...

Be my guest and please to use the line! ^___^ I'm sure you would be able to put it somewhere good.

It is *I* who should be thanking *you* for writing this ficcie~

[zorata]

I tend to like endings that hang, the kind where it's up to the reader to interpret. But I realized that those are the worst kinds for fanfics because it leaves people's fantasies hanging. >_> So I decided to make a complete happy one. XD

Do you have your own fanfics then? I'd love to read them if you do. =D

awww you are giving me my thanks back.... I'll give you a heart then XD

<3

[ara_niey]

awww~jae was so sweet to prepare that pencil box.teehee~

practicing smut?lmao!XD
you're so funny dear~^______________^

[zorata]

Oh, that reminded me of an unwritten scene where jae tried to get yunho to go into a water bottle XD I forgot why I left that scene out... =\

haha, of course I need to practice! If I found out that I can't do it, then 'Of Secrets' will have to adjust its plot. I'd probably adjust the plot now =_= it's really hard to write.

Thank you for reading!

[zorata]

I know eh? Yunho felt really guilty afterwards because it reminded him of his terrible self when he was alive. *spoils*

Thank you for reading! Continuing soon!

[yue_yue]

woooaah...how could I miss the first part of this story!! O_O
aaaww...yunho...I want him !!!! I will kiss him non-stop without any wishes :DDDDDD
and such a pity he made jae forget -.-;
can't wait for more XD

[zorata]

haha then he would've felt guilty for owing you so many wishes XD

It may be a pity for yun to make jae forget... but it's a joy for me to make jae forget =_= I don't want to write about that part again in the next chapter XD I just want to forget about it. (haha the power of the author rules!)

Thank you for reading!